Reviews for Up in Gunsmoke |
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![]() ![]() ![]() the summary should have been hi im a pucking mouthfull |
![]() ![]() update u bum! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The name to call Naruto; I'm sorry you or someone else will have to figure it out I have nothing. You said you don't want Naruto to use jutsu then that means no Kyuubi; because either the series or 70% of the fanfics Kyuubi is approx 10,000 years old and has a big memory and Kyuubi would reveal his memory. I suggest Naruto have the knowledge of Elemental Manipulation with that he could have the nicknames "Elemental Maelstrom" or "Storm Typhoon". If you aren't going to write this then give my ideas to someone else who might write this I just ask that I get base credit for the nicknames |
![]() ![]() ![]() cant wait |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait to see more, are you using the anime version or the manga one? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I look forward to the next chapter when I was very chopped and let me know what happens please PD: THE FANFIC BY CONTINUING TO READ IF YOU WANT ME GOOD WELL ABOVE DISMISSAL |