Reviews for That's My Girl
jeff chapter 3 . 5/26/2017
this is the best thing i've ever read in a long time. i cant stop reading! please keep updating
funkmasterjo chapter 3 . 10/26/2013
I think the sonic 2006 breaks are good. I wonder if you'll ever run out of things to say in them though!

It's really amazing how well this is recaptured. You really must have loved the original. I regret I didn't read it nearly enough. It's for that reason I don't think I'd be much help to you. I only remember what the original said when your words trigger the memory. And what improvements or variations you've made, I could hardly say. That may be a compliment because it means the work is so seamless and you are able to write on the level of such a great work. If there's something I can do then you have my assistance but as I mentioned I don't remember much of the details. Just little plot points and things, and mostly from all's fair.
funkmasterjo chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
Eh? Eh? What happened? You mean the original went down?

Didn't someone keep it for posterity somewhere?! Damn, this is why we need to backup all the good ones. This is a tragedy. I'm so happy that someone would pick up such a noble cause!
SovientHumphrey chapter 6 . 6/3/2013
Great story great story loved from beginning to end,amazing how you manage to build this family in a unique way especially Anne I would really love to see more of this story in the future so please update it ones more.
Rush chapter 6 . 4/18/2013
I'm really enjoying this story. I hope this isn't just left to disappear into the void of unfinished fics. I mean parents... Wow. I want a happy family ending. Guess ill have to wait and see.
MarkOfAlitheia chapter 5 . 2/4/2012
This. Is. AWESOME! It's both funny and sweet! I've really become attatched to this little family of three you've created! I really like Anne's personality. She can be so incredibly clueless sometimes! I also love the extreamly subtle hints you put in that Blaze still cares about Sonic! Please update!
HiveMind chapter 5 . 7/6/2011
And I wonder how they're going to get out of this mess? Or will this politely end the flashback?

I must know!
RubyXIII chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Oh gawd you brought the story back. I can't tell you how much this means to me. When I came to one day and found that all of Dragonbreath1's stories were gone I was disheartened. I still wonder where he went though.

Now that piece of sentiment is out of the way, on to the actual review. The story is extremely well written. And I adore how you bring future(or is it past now?) games into the mix.

Once again, thank you for bringing this back.
D.X.Kingz chapter 5 . 2/16/2011
Dude that one was awesome. Man, getting to read this story again is a real treat and brings back some good bits of nostalgia. Thanks again for the update.
HiveMind chapter 4 . 12/21/2010
Nice to see you return. My patience has been rewarded. :)

I loved the reference to one of Mario's nemeses. That was unexpected, as well as Sonic's pep talk to Queen Blaze. Who knew he was that introspective? And the poor Queen...I did sense that she feels rather helpless in Sonic's dimension whereas in hers, she's used to having things her way: being acknowledged properly, respected, etc. Could be one of the reasons she's annoyed with Amy, aside that the hedgehog's somehow one of her daughter's favorite people. How DID that happen?

I'll admit this chapter is rather slow paced, but I did read the original story, so I have an idea of what's about to happen in the next chapter. I look forward to reading that one.
Profile Has Been Closed chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
I have something of a grudge against many Sonic/Blaze (if you read this, union, NOT SonicxBlaze! That's romance and totally different) stories thanks to one I wrote 3 years ago.

Then again.. maybe I just need to read more of them like this one.

I know. This isn't a critique or a legitimate review. I'll give you a real critique later.
Gaia Bane chapter 4 . 12/20/2010
Very good, very good. Took some time but still, very good.
D.X.Kingz chapter 4 . 12/20/2010
Great chapter. An I gotta say nice tips on the SEGA history hadn't noticed all that before, keep up the good work.

P.S. Quality is fine no worries.
Gaia Bane chapter 3 . 10/31/2010
I like this, finally, someone with enough balls to try this. Keep writing, and may I request you bring back the story where Sonic and Shadow went to hell? I LOVED THAT PART! If you could do this I'd appreciate it, and if you need a few reminders on it, pm me! Looking forward to the next chapter!
HiveMind chapter 3 . 10/16/2010
I rather like the stories being told from the POV of the character telling them. I died at Blaze relating the swimming incident from the Olympics. It was almost like you could hear Sonic interjecting/interrupting the account without his words being literally stated, and imagine his expressions after Blaze's snarky comments.

You're doing very well thus far. I'm looking forward to reading about Anne's encounter with Amy.
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