Really good.

great work

wicked

Short, but interesting. I wonder whether Anne could have forgiven Henry so easily. George was anyway her brother.

I like it very much. At least here Jane Boleyn wasn't as evil as she was in reality.

I like this story and if there is a next chapter, I want to read it.

I'm usually a hater of Jane Parker but I really like her in this fic. I'm glad that she spoke to the King and saved a inncoent life.

Awesome!

Very unrealistic but nice

the end? But this would make an excellent beginning to a story...a rather long story... (hint,hint) ;)xXx

I agree with Redluna and Lady Isabelle - can we have a follow up, please. Great idea - I love it!

could you please made a sequel for this story:

on henry's releasing anne from the tower

the fate of the seymour family

mary's reaction to the news

omg I love it so much...one of the best oneshots I have ever encountered...keep up the good work...look forward to reading more of your work in the future. )

This is such a brilliant idea mostly because it's a "What if?" idea that's actually believable. I've never liked Jane Parker at all really because she helped bring about the death of at least four innocent people, but this made me like her just a bit more.

It's interesting to think that Edward Seymour might have poisoned Anne so that she would loose her son. It's something that I wouldn't really put past him.

Is it wrong to hope for a follow up of some sort?

loved it