Update soon

Dude, I can't wait for the next chapter! Good storyline. :D

Woaohoo finally haou's made his entrance ! Good story love it

OHHH MYSTERY

OH SHIT WHAT HAPPENED I NEED TO KNOW

what is Haou up to? whens the next chapter?

yay! youre up again. :D

please update soon

In a word, amazing! It didn't seem bad to me in the slightest, I absolutely loved the prologue. Awesome job on it!

Wahoo! Things are heating up! So Jaden's a psychic and everyone including Trapper - of course it would be! - is trying to kill him. Was Trapper the shooter from the prologue? Still working that out.

By the way, is Yohan Jesse's brother? They seem to treat each other like brothers. And who's the other guy in the cloak! Argh! This is so confusing yet gripping! That's a good thing!

Just one note, I think Yohan is actually spelt Johan. Unless it's meant to be spelt like that - in that you can ignore this. Just a suggestion.

From me and my friend: thank you for another chapter but please update soon! :D

Hey I have a question. (I was going to PM you but it's disabled.)
I really like the summaries of your stories but I don't want to start a story then finding out it's a yaoi or shonen-ai or spiritshipping. Could you PM me replying if any of your stories contain these?

Argh! Who are the guys in the hoods?! I have a guess for them both, but I'm not certain. And the Duel Monsters are here? WHAT'S GOING ON?!

It's great you updated twice in one day! Keep at it, but, UPDATE MORE PLEASE! ;)

Yay! A new chapter! My friend and I are big fans of this story so please update soon! Please please please! From the both of us!

So Chazz knows Jesse? And now both Syrus and Bastion are suspitious of him? This could be interesting. And who was Jesse talking on the phone to? This is getting exciting! :D

Two things really. Well, three. First off, the story is good! But I do have two critiques- first, ya'll is plural. Its the southern contraction of you all- I'm from the south so I know xD Although, I haven't watched the English dub of the show so it's possible Jesse talks like that so if he does, ignore this- and if it's been pointed out, ignore this- and it was only a few lines in I think chapter 1 or 2 where Jesse says it. It just stuck out to me.

Also, you're making one of the most common mistakes in the English language and it's driving me a little nuts. You keep using 'of' instead of 'have.' For instance- 'could of' should be 'could have.' Again, common mistake, a lot of people make it. There are some other grammar and spelling mistakes, but over all it's really well written and I applaud it. This isn't meant as a flame, but you DID mention you wanted people to let you know of grammar and spelling errors, and since I'm a grammar fascist I thought I would point them out. Also, if you want me to go over your chapters and point out the things that need corrections, you can PM me and I'll be glad to do it. I do it for some friends with essays and such so it won't be a big deal. If you don't want to, I don't mind- I just thought I'd offer :3

I think I know who the three voices are now. I think the first voice is Ruby Carbuncle. The second is the boy who died in the prolouge. And reading this again I think the third voice might be Winged Kuriboh.

This is like my third time reading this! Please update soon! I really like it!