really enjoyed this story. keep it up
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I actually laughed out loud when Chris said "Sasquatch and Alien Brains." I almost never laugh out loud at fanfics. So, you know, kudos to you!

I have read a lot of FanFiction stories in my time, but this, THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST EVER! I love all the NoCo in it. I'll be sure to read way more of your stories in the future!

I guess I'd be interested in the annotations...

Anyway, the story that intrigued me... Well I'm a tad disappointed, and not just because my favorite (Harold) came so close only to get third place. Back in the 'no rules fighting' challenge, the moment I noticed everyone making a big deal over Noah's injury (which was justifiable) I could tell he'd make it to the finals, plus he's a fan favorite.

I expected him to make it far, and he even won. He won in a way better than I was starting to anticipate, but still I kind of which you would've subverted it or something. This story also goes to show that Noah is better in small doses. You didn't mess up his character, but I do realize that he's the kind of character who could potentially get annoying if around for a whole season.

Overall not too bad a story. Not the best I've read, probably a bit lower than Total Drama Comeback (not that I was comparing the two throughout, I'm just saying I found this to be that good). There weren't enough before challenge/after challenge things going on aside from unlocking the doors and the eliminations, but it got less noticeable later on, because I think you got on your feet better later on with the characterization.

Speaking of which, while you did handle the characters well, there were some occasions were I felt like you dropped a ball. Alejandro seemed more like a pushover in this story, but to be fair by that point everyone knew what he was. And while I don't care about the whole love triangle mess in World Tour, I think you handled it kind of abruptly with the Gwent revival. It wasn't a bad choice in concept, but like I said, you did it kind of abruptly. Bridgette was way more nervous and shy in the few chapters she was around than she seems in the show, despite the reasoning you gave. And Tyler... I don't know, I'm not for making him sympathetic, but I don't see a big problem here.

Everyone else you handled pretty well, or at least never worse than the show itself at its lower points.

Overall good story, good ideas, passable execution, and almost-perfect characterization. I liked reading this.

Sorry if this review is a bit long. But I kind of pride myself on trying to give more insight than "lol it's good write more" like most of the website does.

Uh-oh. Those three are now the last three, that means no matter what I'll be slightly disappointed. Nice meta humor with Chef/DJ/DJ's mom's voice actor. And I liked the seagull's cameo.

How ironic he gets saved by a sacrifice similar to how he sacrificed himself once.

And wow, I knew he was eccentric, but picking up on the fact that that they're cartoons? XD I didn't know those kinds of thoughts went into his head!

XD "Will DJ snap and kill everybody?" Well obviously.

Is Gwen even physically capable of crying?

The ceremony at the end was anticlimactic, but I appreciate that you kept Ezekiel's personality as the "I think I'm better than I really am" wannabe instead of making him far too sympathetic than he should be.

I'm intrigued. I want to see where this is going. I don't read too many fan seasons, but partly because their intro chapters weren't as good as this.

I liked season 3, but this is still good, I can't wait to read more, I hope it's good. Also, interesting way of choosing teams.

Yeah go Noah!

Haha I got the Monty python joke in that one chapter.

What is the air speed velocity of an unladen sparrow?

African or European?

Lol!

I needz a sequal XD

This is definitely my favorite story on this site so far. i just loved it

Oh my God.

That was beautiful! I mean, I can't even...GAH. I'm so sad that it's over.

Is it shameful that I teared up when Cody told Noah he loved him? Because I did. Heck, I didn't tear up, I cried. It was fabulous.

I slightly shared Izzy's annoyance when he said "As a friend", but, hey. It wouldn't have been very realistic otherwise, now would it have? Hahaha.

I can't even tell you which part was my favorite. I didn't have a favorite part, because all of it was so good!

I would love annotations on this story!

As for the story as a whole, I absolutley adored every word. I kind of figured out Noah was going to win by the fifth chapter, as you obviouly love him. I can also say that if I were to go about writing a story like this, I would have made it perfectly clear that Noah was going to win. Unintentionally, but still obviously.

And I don't even know if you did this intentionally, but this was actually one of the better NoahCody peices I ever read.

It was amazing. Are you going to be doing anythinng like it in the future?

*claps* Ah, wonderful end for a wonderful story.

The amount of effort you put into this is simply astounding, not to mention how frequently you posted the chapters up- showing that this fic had a lot of your attention and dedication.

I have to admit that I'm quite impressed with how well you were able to pull this off, keeping both the characters in character and making the elimination realistic but satisfying.

I look forward to reading more from you in the future C:.

HA HA HA YES! That was amazing I am so glad you did this! And you did finish this before monday, wow this was just fantastic and I am so sad to see it be over D: I am going to miss it. But Congrats, you did a fantabulous job! Thank you very much! 3