Damn that's sooo sad, but I love it :3 :')

Very nicely done.

Oh dear, this was so sad :'(

Nice! I liked it. The very last question in the best part.

Well done!

Needed something angsty, so I came back to this fic. I don't know why I didn't review, though it's more likely I was exploding to you about it on MSN, or maybe incoherent.

This fic hurts me. It digs deep into my chest and tries to claw its way out and I could seriously just burst into tears over it.

This is my favorite:

-6 seconds to call out his name. To cry, "Chuck!", to whisper, "Charlie," and to barely notice the teary tracks running down their faces, because the only thing they can see is Charlie, his eyes fluttering, his pulse weak, his blood draining from his body almost as rapidly as his strength.-

I hate you so much right now. Go make me a sandwich you freaking jerk -bursts into tears-

Wow. I loved this.

Exceedingly well done.

This is still amazing the second time. :D

Paaaaaaaat. You took this idea we kind of...well threw at you and went with it and it came out AWESOME. Just so you know. ;)

Don, Alan, and Charlie were there, side by side, even though they weren't saying anything aside from the horribly usual, "It will all be okay (we hope)," and, "The ambulance is coming (we've only just begun to be a family again)," and in a certain brother's case, "Hold on, Chuck (I need you)."

I think this is my favorite part of this, probably because of the way you emphasized the fact that even the things they /aren't/ saying are still made clear because that's what Alan and Don /really/ mean and gaaaaaaah.

I'm clearly a very inarticulate person when I love a fic, but still I wanted to say it all. I love the countdown format and the way everything is described and the prose of it all.

MORE PLEASE.

-Christina 3

I liked the format of this story - the countdown to ... what? And, I'm glad you didn't say that Charlie definitely died. His death is better being implied, not established. Anything could happen. The angst was beautifully done. Thank you.

Beautifully written. I'd love you to do more.