I like the way it was twisted to make Voldemort good...talk about redemption...but I have to ask how it made him want to be good in that body?

great story please do write more..

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this is a good plot, but it could have been written better. spelling and grammar is poor so i would reccoment editing this.

nice story.. good job... had fun! :)

Fun little story and thanks for sharing!

Great story!

It would have been nice to see Dobby & Winky be one of Harry's true friends.

I wish it was longer though.

this sounds like it could be a good story. my advise is to fix all the spelling mistakes, arrange it in chronological order (over half of it being various flashbacks is confusing) and expand it. instead of harry and sirius talking being just a few paragraphs expand it to an entire chapter, add some more chapters for when harry is at school, at grimmauld place for christmas, letters/floo calls/mirror calls to sirius during the school year, ect should be several chapters.

interesting story. storyline is good. your a good author

Okay, that was simply too terribly written to finish.

I read the first two or three chapters, and was tormented by misspellings, bad grammar, and sentences that definitely need MORE punctuation.

I suggest you try and improve your writing (a lot) and possibly get a Beta.

(It's Hermione, not Hermoine.)