I liked the story so far. Hopefully you'll finish it

Interesting start! Looking forward to more! :)

Cute story :) I'm looking forward to how it plays out. Please update it soon!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Young Master and to be continued? I know Kyouya has to be rich but damnit. I think I'm just as shocked as Chrome-chan. A fortress. Really Hibari-san? In other news, I'm now wallowing in misery because of the tbc note. A cliffhanger. Why is this my life? orz

Trust the prefect to have a lookout for illusions. Still, the small tidbit about Mukuro deeming his precious illusions as children makes sense since it is his brainchild after all. Pardon the terrible pun.

-you-to-death backtracking for Chrome-chan? Pfft. How sweet. At least we now know he is human. Albeit a carnivorous and dangerous human. A very, very, very scary human. Hibari and sweet? Ah no no, I mean it was nice of him. Nice of him. Merciful of him. Sweet, huh? No of course not. Did I say that? I must be so eager to die. Wait I'm not. Still, I have no regrets. My OTP shall rule!

please continue this! oh,pretty pretty please!

please oh please continue it! you portray Hibari really well!

Especially the flying fountain pen, lol. And its so cute even with

just the simple gestures! your writing style is also awesome,

i love it! XD

so... update? :3

like it, but will you continue it?

Oh, I loved this! You had me sold around when Hibari threw the pen. I love your writing style! It's detailed, but straightforward. And incredibly amusing. I dearly hope you continue!

kshslhahdk. See that? That was me passing out on my keyboard from an epileptic fit of awesomeness halfway through this chapter. It's amazing. Seriously. Hibari is so IC it sends chills up my spine, the premise is plausible, and it is .WRITTEN. It's even grammatically correct; I'm freakin' out over here.

I hope you continue this. I would get down on my knees and beg you to if I had to, but that's a bit creepy, really. But this is a gem, one of the best stories I've stumbled across on , even though it's only one chapter. I know inspiration can be fickle, but I'm crossing my fingers. n_n

It's cute XD write more please!~

Loved it! Please update!

My beloved Chrome, first of all if you're asking if I read this fanfic... NO, I didn't. )) It's suicide for me, but I love you. How can you not tell me that you wrote a fanfic and postec it? :\ Anyway, we should totally start writing fanfics on pairings we actually agree on... for once. :)) Good luck with the writing and don't kill me if I won't read them. (Not that you can kill me, but, um...you get the point)

Sincerely,

The moron who hired you. Tsuna.

P.S. This was an awesome review and if there were any errors (spelling or misused words), forgive me since I am using my super perverted and contaminated phone. I HEARTS 3 YOUUUU. See ya soon. ;3

omg, hibari the batman

and here comes hibari-fred

hibari in a box...

lovely

the reborn part was awesomeness.

even to me i find it hard to imagine how to persuade hibari.

(Although Chrome would never tell him that, because Mukuro was very fragile and emotional when it comes to his illusions, even going as far as to call them his 'children')

haha that line made me laugh.

Please update soon!

Update soon yeah