Reviews for Toeing the Line
Emma chapter 5 . 10/15/2019
EDWARD IS A GRADE A Jake don't deserve any of this hate and ...FUCK YOU EDWARD CULLEN AND ISABELLA IN THE HALLWAY TO HELL!1
Guest chapter 5 . 10/9/2019
that's not fair. Why did I only discover this perfection after all this time? Does anyone know if there is a continuation? I'm in abstinence here, I need more
cherubs007 chapter 5 . 1/14/2017
umm, that's it? please tell me there is a sequel coming soon, i am already feeling angst, please tell me there is happy ending to it? pretty please?
Guest chapter 5 . 4/3/2016
Were is the Rest o.o I wann to read more *-*
sampam69 chapter 5 . 7/14/2015
Poor Jake, loved the story
Juliakaze26 chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
It was so heart wrenching I was weeping thru out...it's a pity about the sequel... Crossing the line...I was dying to read it...
DevilGene chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
pls make the crossing the line already...pls...
lovingbites chapter 5 . 4/14/2013
I'm hoping you continue this soon or at least have a sequel it seems unfinished
crocadile1986 chapter 5 . 3/24/2013
is that it?
Breyito chapter 5 . 3/21/2013
Oh, Oh! I think Jake is pregnant ;)
xD
There will be a sequel, right? Right?
Please, tell me there will be!
I can't evoid want those two to be together...

Kiss
neko1998 chapter 5 . 12/23/2012
Screw bella! But mpreg that made my night kyahh! I can't wait
DevilGene chapter 5 . 8/26/2012
this is too short...this should totally have a sequel...this is...wow...I'll wait for a sequel...
DevilGene chapter 4 . 8/26/2012
bloodly lemon...So hot!
Guest chapter 5 . 7/18/2012
I just wonder if this is the end or you gonna still write ?
MidnightBreathe chapter 5 . 7/17/2012
that's really good...you're a good writer :D
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