Reviews for Siriusly Troubled
EmeraldFlower24 chapter 1 . 6/23/2019
This siriusly did sound something that Sirius would do
Guest chapter 1 . 4/3/2019
Aww I love this haha!
NorwegianGirl chapter 1 . 4/19/2015
Wow, this was truly genius!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
Haahhhaaa funny:)
purplepam chapter 1 . 5/20/2014
Hehee..Sirius was cute in this. Great job.
starlight.moon.princess chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
Oh Merlin, is it bad that my mind just went to the alternative implications of "big feet?"
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Yeah, it probably is.
I promise I'm not constantly dirty minded!...No wait, I do tend to be, but I won't be for the rest of this review :P

I LOVE this. It's very like Sirius to wake James up at 3 am to have a conversation about the size of his feet - and the fact that the reason he's obsessing over it is a girl is even more perfect :P
Add to that logical!Remus and sleeping!Peter, and you just have a recipe for hilarity xD

This was brilliant - well done (:
Isha Saini chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
Ha ha ha! Oh my God, now that's what you call funny! Excellent comedy story, keep it up like this! I really liked how you showed James' reaction to Sirius' odd question. The end was great ... it's true, we all have flaws.

Best Wishes,
Flame Dawn
SKewedViEW chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
hahaha that was hilarious!
DDC chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
Wow... Talk about problems. :D I would wake up my best friend in the middle of the night if I thought I had big feet. JK! :D But I can see my friends and me having a conversation like that at 3 AM...
Nikki-Love013 chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
Love the ending :)
AGirlWithTheBrokenSmile chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Nice! It was really funny,and I think you nailed Sirius pretty well! This seems like something he would do...

Good job!

:)

-Lily
Katali1993 chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Hmm, Sirius and his ideas of what things are important is funny. Is the underlying problem that Sirius doesn't want to be like his father or is just being silly and worrying about stupid things? I like how he doesn't want to wake Remus up, but when Remus is up he wakes Peter up too. And I think James's reaction is realistic for someone who has been woken in the middle of the night.

Your sentences are very short at the beginning. I think this is effective to some extent but it might be better if you use more complex sentence structures or use colons or connectives.
ProfessorSquirrell chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
This is cute. I can see this conversation actually happening. And I love that Remus wakes up and really puts an end to the conversation by putting it in perspective. I love the Marauders and I thought they were all really in character. Well done!
jilyspottering chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
Hilariously funny! I love it! It was very nicely written and I really enjoyed it! :)
Rani Jashalithie chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
These are so funny! I love this type of interaction, almost dialogue-only.

Big feet...hahahaha...Wow, honestly, I thought I had big feet, but this puts a whole new perspective on things. :)
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