This is gold, I love it

I love how you portrayed Dumbledore, granted, your dialogue could use some polishing, and the whole "swear on your magic" fannon thing is silly as hell, but at least is not that bad of a beginning

It has an interesting premise but I just can't get over the grammer mistakes. Sorry

This was an amazing story before the knowledge transfusion/master of death don't get me wrong it wasn't bad after either but it just wasn't the same. With that being said this is still a great story and I thank you for sharing!

Sad you left it. 3 to 4 chapters more and that’s a wrap.

Is a very good story that kept me entertained and gave me a few laughs. It’s unfortunate that it fell off towards the end and remains largely unfinished but it is still a good story of a whimsical dumbledore/harry mentor ship filled with blood, gore, and great combat.

Spectacular

Are you still on this site? Please update this story or rewrite it! It shouldn't fade away into obscurity.

Absolutely brilliant fic. Mentor!Dumbledore fics are my favorite and you handled this perfectly. Loved EVERY SINGLE MINUTE of reading this!

Your description of magic and depth of magical lore is incredibly vibrant, bested by few fics that I can think of, all of which are multiple times longer. Your characterization is phenomenal.

I hope you do a seuqel! I would LOVE to see some of the neater aspects of being a Class 5 mage (especially the temporal magic and precognition!). Also it would be amazing to see if any aspects of Dumbledore and Gellert's consciousness remain (your characterization of them in Ch14 was phenomenal!).

wow nice note at the end

no don't tell anyone I let you have a drink I mean who cares about all the other stuff I told you
I like that

I don't know if you still see any reviews people leave on here, but know that there's at least one person that would live to see more of this. Excellent story whether you finish it or not.

it's a pity you haven't continued the story. It was a good read

FUCKING AWESOME! Cant wait for the next chapter...

This is really awesome! I especially like the twists with Dumbledore being magicless (essentially) and then the experiment that was forced on him by Dumbledore and Grindelwald.. Hope you decide to carry it on...