Reviews for A Moment in the Dark
derektomlinson chapter 1 . 12/10/2019
cloud saying to his girlfriend and wife tifa you was not the only one that was scared i was scared three times the first time i was scared is when you slipped on the rope bridge on mount nibel the second time i was scared was when you went after sephiroth with his sword to try to kill him with his sword and then he took his sword from you and gave you that scar across your shoulder to your side running between your breasts and the third time was when i found you in aeris s church
derek chapter 1 . 6/26/2019
tifa saying to cloud I love you
Derek chapter 1 . 1/16/2019
Tifa to cloud there is something you could do for me before you leave cloud to tifa what kind of thing are you talking about tifa to cloud the thing that I was talkingabout is for you to put your penis into my pussy and to let me ride your penis right now
derek chapter 1 . 10/7/2018
tifa to cloud if you ever do something like that again I will hunt you down and kiss your ass over and over
FreeWritingGeek22 chapter 1 . 6/10/2016
This should have happened in the movie! It would have been so good and added to the moment. Great job:)
Boohbear19 chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
This was great! :D
sycce chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
omg you know, if that moment in the movie would've been really there...I think I would've died 'cause it is so BRILLIANT hahhaha I love it 3 gosh why isn't that scene in the movie? :)
Raekwon The Genius chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
Yo,I just came across this and I just had to say that It was very keep the characters there selves,and you played on a the scene In AC very this was In the movie,It would have made more legendary.I defiantly read more of work especially the CloTI kind PEACE AND LOVE.
DeadAccount0000 chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
Awwww! If only it were in the movie...I would be able to yell at the CloTi haters and say, "HAHA! IN YOUR FACE!"...Anyway, this was beautiful and I LOVED it! Good job!

Yours Truely,

Cloud's kid 1
Pookyilicous chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
beautiful :D

Pooky xxxx
Wyngana chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
I'm glad you wrote this, I was waiting for something to happen in the bedroom in the movie :D
Juleezy chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
This was really cute! A little bit mistakes but still cute!
Snookens5 chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
Aww that was a nice moment! I dont know what pairing i like more Cloud and Tifa or Zack and Tifa :3
TifaXCloud chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
OMG THAT WAS AMAZING! I think its outrageous that no one had reviewed this amazing piece of work, so HERE I AM! This story was so good it kinda made me tiery eyed... AND ITS GONNA BE CONTINUED? WHEN? I NEEEEEED MORE! Thanks for doing this! It really motivates me! :D