Reviews for Tension |
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TMI Fairy chapter 1 . 11/30/2015 Nice. And blokes cry too :) Borys |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012 Nicely written, but rushed, you are right. Needs more build up. Some examples of Ash's rebellions against femininity, some more time spent arguing before Ash reveal how she feels. |
Lady Alstreim chapter 1 . 6/28/2012 Very nice, thanks for a good fic. Really captured the mood and the way I think Ash would react in a situation like that. |
zettaslow chapter 1 . 3/16/2012 Oh yes, this is great, you must develop this. DEVELOP IT I SAY! DEVELOP IT! |
Jade Catherine chapter 1 . 9/30/2011 Short, but a good little look at how hard it is to actually talk to a parent about this stuff. |