Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! The ending is 10/10 and the bit where she completely forgot who Gary was for the moment was absolute perfection! 'Who?' :DDD

Wow Keller does a lot of crying! She must be a really emotional person in your eyes, but she doesn't come across as it in the series. She's more innocent and calculating in the series, but I never imagined her as a cry-feel-bad person, if you get what I mean.

Ooh you're adding John/Teyla to the mix? Things are getting even more interesting!

Does he have the sickness now?

"The one you seek is out there, waiting for you"
This makes me think. i always believe God has someone out there for me.

Does jen realize who waiting for her?

She has someone there for her. i know the feelings "do i belong?"

Thank you for the clean Romance story. i love how it is starting with Friendship first.

The happy, fluffy endings are by far the best. Great job throughout the whole thing! :D

I was sobbing by the end of this it was that good :')

Fantastic plot, great character development and completely filled with enough emotion to flood the Grand Canyon

Well done xo

Sowwy I'm just now getting to this. The reading of the entire thing will take some time but here's the first review:

You've really captured the characters in this. I honestly hadn't thought about what would be going through Lorne's mind when he came back to himself after the Kirsian fever incident. But you managed to capture it.

Great work!

Great story. Really nice idea and details. I would've liked it if John and Teyla could've had their happily-ever-after too, but... I'm glad Jenn and Evan got theirs.

Glad Jenn was able to sort things out in her head and for Lorne to hear. Finally being able to tell him she love him was probably worth the wait. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Loved the peek at Lorne's inner struggle and where his thoughts were leading him. Jennifer's exhaustion seemed to give her the courage to express her anxieties.

I love watching them grow closer and closer. I though would expect that Lorne would be upset to be kept out of a mission.