Will you make a sequel?

This story was FREAKING AWESOME!. i can't belive i didn't find this sooner!.. and theres only 27 *cough28cough* reveiws! O.O..

..okay.. im done freaking out ''...

-i really like that the story goes on in the organisation. most of the fanfics i've read went on in a high scool or something like that.. The way this is written makes it feel really autentic!... -like this could actually have been what happened in the organisation, and still wouldn't have changed the game.. (yup.. right now im kinda hoping that's what happened.. even though i hate Axel a little for that last part..he should have gone to roxas (cause akuroku is *o*) and let zexy have demdem.. but then it wouldn't have been as good.. i hate myself a little for saying that i think it's good axel killed of zexy D: but it is.. it too makes it seem more real, 'cause that gives Axel a reason to be such an idiot in the game.. i just called myself an idiot WTF? XD..im both a Demyx, (Riku,) Axel and Zexion cosplayer XD.. AND I HAVE A SUPER INNOCENT SHOTA ROXAS! *o*.. who also is going to be my sora.. he doesn't really know anything 'bout yaoi.. that would scare the crap out of him! XD... and the way Axel makes his coffee.. that's mine too!.. one of mah favourites is 1/2 coffee, 1/2 milk.. a LOT of cocoa and sugar (when i say a lot i mean 2-3 tablespoons OO.. yup.. that's a lot), and on top vanilla icecream and whipcream .. XD.. i know, it sounds kinda gross, but only thing is to remember not to drink 3 of those right after eachother..you'll get hyper.. and most likely throw up too... even if i didn't...- and fanfics with zexy baking, even though he can't is *o* (and zexy baking WITH DEMYX is..*nosebleed*).. it's even happening in my fanfic!xD.. but im a lazy idiot so i haven't updated it yet X.X..back to the story! )

it's soo cool how you makes them all act so in-character (demdem was a little OOC.. but hey! i too like him like that! X3)this story tells A LOT about the organisation and descripes all of the 'members' completely, which is EXCACTLY what iv'e been waiting for! really good job! XD..oh and yeah.. i too think that the ending was a little rushed.. but i think it's good anyway.. i was just about to cry there.. XD. ARRG! im writing a looooot X.X... but hey! it's not me who have written 27 chapters! XD.. i guess im out?.. probably forgot something... a well..

-imNameless

While most of them were average, I think the last part with Demyx was disappointing for seeming rushed. First off, Whenever he talks you have seemed to skip commas (something you've done through the whole story, but at any rate), making him sound like he talks fast. And with so little description to what he does, or what Xigbar does, I just feel like I'm reading about a robot that could care less about Axel or Zexion alike. Maybe it was the lack of thoughts from him, but it seemed too rushed to have Demyx just explain that he thinks it's sad but he didn't know them and he is more sad for another. He's talking to XIGBAR, one of the original members, and who was close to the other originals alike. Explaining to Xigbar that he really doesn't care that half of his best friends are dead as long as HIS own friend survives really isn't the smartest thing to do, that includes this story's Demyx' intelligence. It would be more realistic if he was shocked to hear of the annhialation, thinking back to the faded members, then ask again if Axel survived to make sure he heard right. Then he could give out a sigh of relief, and instead of Demyx talking about Zexion like that, maybe either be a little more sensitive, or THINK his "relationship" with him. For example, he could wonder why Xigbar asked about his reaction to Zexion's death, and then he could qickly think back to their moments together to make sure he had not missed something. Then we would be summed up what the illusions Zexion has put into him are, too.

It has been a good and funny story, but I think this chapter should have been read by a beta, because it felt too rushed for me to think of it as a good ending to a good story.

Sad ending! Im also mad sad the story is over...really hope you keep writing.

He... forgot Zexy? D

The ending was so sad... And that last line was a perfect ending. You're an amazing writer, mate )

ohhhhh i dont like the ending well i do but i would have really liked to see what happens between Axel an Demy but yay no Zexy

So cute! I got to say that I love Zexion and Demyx and the way you wrote the scene with them was freaking brilliant! I cant wait for the next chapter! After you write this will you write more story's please! 'coz I would so read them!

oh i would have liked it to be axel and demyx i wont complain i like the story anyway cant wait for the nevet and final chapter

lol i likez again please no i dont like zexy and demyx together please leave him w/ axel send zexy away... anyways good story still and cant wait for more

I love this story. You have a good timing and seem to have thought your plot out to have it all planed. Demyx's hyperness is a little over done for me (I like my men more mature) but the clueless attitude is kind of cute.

Please keep the chapters coming. I cant wait to see how Roxas and Axel start interacting.

oh my gosh i love it please post more soon

this story is a freaken awsome one. it's too bad not many people review it because i absolutly love it! But I am sad that demyx won't end up with axel but i do love zexion with him though. I am so looking forward to reading more of this story soon!

omg im scared of what will happen next but i hate akuroku but if the story turns to some i guess i'll just have to over look it and i feel special being named in the begining:) any ways cant wait to read more now off to latin hw (stupidest thing ever)

Aww so cute the two of them at the end of the chapter.

Wow, I can't believe there are only 14 reviews for 22 Chapters as beautifully written as these! Congrats on a well-written story, though! I've really enjoyed your take on things in the Org 13 life, especially because of the focus on Demyx, my favorite member. It's been fun to experience each new member's addition, although I like it most when it's just focused on Demyx's everyday life. I'm looking forward to seeing their more favorable reaction to Xion's personality as compared the previously sole female member. _

So far, I'm getting really fed up with Axel's blatant clingyness and jealousy (it's very in-character and well-written tho) and now that he's kissed Roxas, that adds a whole bunch more drama to an already tempestuous relationship! I'm looking forward to much more in the future! Definitely feeling the Zexyx so far, and I hope you don't restrict Xion's interactions with Demyx too much, as I have a feeling they could get on pretty well.

Keep up the good work, it's always nice to read a well-done Org 13 story!