Usually I'm a real fan of akuroku especially and some rikuxsora, but I love the concept of this story, and therefore I'll forgo my loyalty to my shippings. it take a really interesting story to make me do that, and therefore I commend you for your creativity. nice piece and I eagerly await more.

lol. Xion gave him a nickname without his permission.

I was shocked by what Naminé did, I can't wait to find out why everyone else is acting the way that they are.

I love the summary, it's very intriguing.

I really hope to see a little more haynette, you've portrayed them very nicely even if Hayner does act a little OOC.

Good chapter, can't wait for more.

I think this story is off to a very good start! I like how you have all of these parallel addictions with each girl masking their relationships. A few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing to distract the reader. I do hope you continue and I will certainly be awaiting to see how these girls will overcome their problems!

(Kairi a sex addict? Holy moly!)

Love,

SonChan

i like how u made my favorite nobodies into good guys :)

This was a great chapter! I can't wait to read the next one. :D

and no problem on being your first reviewer~

Aww, I feel so sorry for all of them.

I like how you described Nami's point of view, it was interesting. And you're writing from Luxord's point wasn't that bad either.

Once again, a little more description wouldn't hurt either, but I really liked the character development, and am looking forward to the next chapter.

This is very good! Well written, and great character development so far. I really like it, I can't wait for the next chapter. :)

This story is of to an interesting start. I like how you're focusing on different canon couples.

You can never add enough description right?

I gasped when I saw Olette's problem. Scary stuff.

I can't wait for the next chapter! :D