This is the most hilarious TMM story I have EVER read. You did a good job.

When i read this i almost died laughing Sugar is the coolest 6 year old i have ever read about and the only write a sequel please

Lol he dos not tast like pie that is funny

AWSOME AWSOME AWSOME! I FREAKEN LOVED IT I KNEW THATS HOW IT WOULD END THIS STORY IS PURE AWSOMENESS I CANT STAND HOW AWSOME THIS STORY PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MAKE MORE STORIES! (_)

Make another story! Lol pleeeeease? I loved it xD And I sort of feel bad for Pai, Taruto, and Kisshu...

Will Ichigo find out about the book? Will Akasaka-san let Sugara out on other missions? Will Pai, Kisshu, and Taruto ever show their faces on Earth again? The world may never know... If you quit writing! ...So don't stop!

Ohhhh Pai should've done more research... Now Sugara is maaaaaaad! Can't wait for more!

I like your story a lot! please continue writing! (:

this is pretty amusing! i love Sugara! she is so cute...but kinda evil and devilish. anyway, please update soon! i can't wait to see what Sugara does to them next! 0

wow... so the aliens have super superglue? that's cool xD

Poor Akasaka-san...

xD 'Also, hence my young age, I will be needing to entertain myself, as I could die from boredom.'

Priceless!

bahaha I love it XD Pai is Mr. Revenge now lol. MY all time favorite part: "WELL. THAT deserves chocolate."

XD write more!

Ahahahahahaha kawaii 3 3

Gaaah cliffie D: bad! haha the only thing that jumped out at me was that you spelled 'sweaty' instead of sweety but no worries :) I enjoyed it xD

I love all of your descriptions! The cake sounds especially delicious! There are some grammatical errors like missing punctuation, but other than that it's awesome! I love Sugara and her puppy and how you incorporated the Mew Mew's personalities in with your writing. :) Write more soon!