Oh yeah the spelling error are not as many just one or two in each chapter not as bad as having the whole thing having spelling errors

I can see a few mistakes (mostly spelling) but yours is way better than some of the other fics I have read

The story itself is a very good one. But the many, many spelling and gramatical errors are a put out.
couscous instead of concious
fallow instead of follow
wait instead of what or want
worm instead of warm and so on

And something that irks me raw is, that in Dawns first enchanting lesson her dragon was silver. Now it is red. Did you forget the colour of the dragon?

Read through number 4 :)

It’s good but your spelling isn’t the best. It kind of annoys me, but I can’t get passed it. Great job! :)

Other than the grammatical errors this was a,good story.

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I think in this part were Dawn save Neville's grandmother Augusta is a way to show that the Longbottoms gained their sense of bravery from Augusta's rescue

I think I'm on my third reread of this story. I love it

Awesome story.

I don't know if you still read these but if you do

I think this is a great story but there are some inconsistenties in there:
1. Grindlewald is freed twice
2. The meeting beteren Augusta and Dawn when they return to the present is not compleetly correct either
I do not know if there are other inconsistenties, but i would read it if i wereld you to be able to Read them Yourself.

this story is great ,, there are only a bit of stories written of fem harry x draco so this is one of a kind (in a good way)

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Good story overall

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