This was just so sweet and perfect. I think I just got a cavity.

Rage? Firey death? Well things escalated quickly.
Honestly this was adorable and exactly what I needed today!

That was so cute!

Zeus should change that stupid law so any god could take care of their own children & keep them with them all their lifes!

I really liked it! I did not think he was OOC, but I guess we will learn more about Apollo in the new series :)

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

It's not too OOC, because I love the idea of Apollo being a father who actually loves and cares about his kids. Both he and Will make adorable doting fathers.

Loved it! Very cute!

Loved it, really did. I thought it was cute and very believable.

Aw oh my goodness I ADORED this! Apollo was so kind and awesome, Will was sweet, Summer was adorable! I just.,, this was really good.

i was lising to the song made me cry

Squee

SO CUTE there aren't enough stories with Apollo Kids who are truly the best. I just love Apollo, I just love Will, and I just love this story. And the bit with the little sunshine and the little girl named Sunshine ahhhhh you melted my heart!

Keep it up,
Lilac

This was not OOC and cheesy at all! This fanfic was perfect! It made me realize that although there was not much family fluff in the series, I still appreciate the fact that Apollo readily claims his children in the series (and I know that's true even though I didn't read much in the series)... Great job and keep up the good work in writing this kind of fanfic!

Awwwwwweeeeeeeeee. That was sooooo kawaii. Like seriously. And- I don't know... I don't think Apollo was OOC. ALl in all, really amazing.