pouting...

. WHY DID YOU STOP?! TT I though (dispute some grammatical errors) you were a great writer...now im depressed... xD but good fic anyways...

Light should kiss L in front of Misa!

stupid Light and his plans to make L jealous!

Awwww!

This first chapter is good. I like the story. I like where it's going BUT...the thing you must work on is how you word your sentences and paragraphs. It should flow a little easier then. It kind of threw me off a little bit but I honestly do like the plot so far _

hola! well first i love this. i would actually believe this to be part of the real story. so i beg you...BEG you to write more. also i think like L should keep his cool and then Light gets angrified at him for not reacting how he wanted and would start to do stuff with L.

This is amazing! Keep going! :D

I love this story sooo much! it is extremely realistic! the only thing that bothered me was that in the lemon Light didnt get plesured... but i guess thats ok since most of the time people (like me) only read these for L

YAY, thank you!

Btw, love the waitress bit, lol. Poor Light, granted he was using Misa to get L jealous which is kinda mean but he also had to suffer through dealing with her, so really he got what he deserved /grin

Thank you for the props /blush I just really like L/Light as a pairing and what you've done with them is quickly turning into my favorite of them :)

Btw, the 97% sure comment made me giggle so hard I almost slipped out of my computer chair, hehe. So L :)

I like it but I'm a bit irritated with L for being a nub. I mean, yeah, I get that he really has no idea how to handle this stuff, but at least get some more booty first! /grin (Yes, I am a sex fiend, sue me)

Hope you get a chance to update, curious to see where this goes :)

oh cool story! would be great if you keep it going!

Hahaha! L's getting jelous! Kewl chapter cant wait till the date begins!

Holy Shit; I just read this story, and I left to go find another one (since this one was a oneshot) and I liked this one so much that I decided to come back and read it again, and then I saw this new chapter JUST as it was posted!

SHA!

You said I should read it... You should write more death note yaoi! Loved it! L is adorable! If I ever stop giggling at L's cluelessness then I may be able to breath again... maybe... or maybe I'll die and go to yaoi heaven... Wait, is that a bad thing? Lol. Loved it!