Heartbreaking!

I had a feeling he was Ivor. He slipped at one point and almost said Ianto. That is some guilt to be living with. No wonder his mother ran into the house.

Wished there was now to this.

"My god. I am a monster," thought Jack. LOL He is pretty horrible sometimes. I like it though, but only when it's directed at the alien menace or willfully evil people who have no regrets, not his friends, not Ianto who's sweet and so broken. Retcon, that solves everything doesn't it. It's perfect. That way the only person who will have to live with the memory of the painful interrogation is Jack who was in charge of it. :P

i would love to find out the teams reaction to the short acting retcon. brilliant story

Loved the story - especially the fantastic twist at the end. Nice job :)

WHOA! Twist ending! That's so... what? What? Aww... THAT'S AWESOME! (that's how I usually react IRL when I read something this great)

Wow this story was really touching...it actually made me cry!

...this is reminding of what happened to Fai in xxxHolic.

The story is just so intense and your ending rendered me speechless. Just brilliant!

Tricky, tricky...almost didn't see it. Nice twist!

aww my gawd, i didnt realise why the mother ran back in until i read the last few lines again... :o he is Ivan and his mother threw Ianto in, omg im so slow, thats a real sad story, evil jack...poor Ivan/Ianto person

That was so intense, and I loved it. .

#gasp#

Fantastic buildup and conclusion! I really enjoyed it, thanks!

That was really really great! I love twists and this was a big one :D.. I didn't see it coming at all xD