Excellent chapter! Very emotional, and interesting bits with the Captain.

Ha! A very silly and very funny chapter, between the seriousness of the latter half of Mankind's existence.

An excellent start! I'm looking forward to reading more, I like what I see.

Prompt: Usagi and Lorgar have a debate during the heresy.
PLEASE DO THIS
YOU ARE AWESOME
MORE PLEASE MORE

This interlude reminds me of the Girl Genius webcomic.

The fact that this story ended where it did is one of the great shames of fanfiction. So many people (as evidenced by the comments) want to see more, to see where this is going and where the story could have lead. It's been so long now doubtless the original author has long since moved on or even forgotten about it, but I would hope that maybe, someday we can see it continue.

Before I first read this fic, I don't even know Warhammer, but I do know Sailor Moon. Your writing is so good, no scratch that, it's very good. Despite me reading this blind the first time, I was already hooked by the prologue. This is one of the diamonds in the rough, fanfiction itself has quite the tainted name, but finding a gem of a fic is really satisfying, especially after hours of digging. You are one of the authors that inspired me to read up on the Horus Heresy series.

My praise might not be enough, but I hope it would give you the drive to continue.

Holy Crap! Whoa!

Is this it? Is this all of it? Never in a million years could I ever think that a sailormoon and warhammer fanfic could work. I'm very envious of people's writing capabilities, yet still this was profoundly written. Too bad you aren't going to continue, I'm dying to know what happens next.

What will happen to Horus now that Serenity has returned to the SM universe?

I just had to read this again... Damn freaking awesome. The feels this chapter were real towards the end there. Such good balance in the story. God I want to know more sooooo badly, I want to see Serenity grow up, I want to see her with her brothers, I want to see her leading in the Imperium, and I want to see her kicking butt. Then, it all falls apart... (Perhaps, she could be found again, who knows. Was reading some of the big thread about this, the idea of Horus (or someone) rocking up in the SM universe begging forgiveness and to bring her home would be pretty sweet and full of feels.) I just love this whole Lovehammer concept so much I'd probably pay you to write it, lol. Seriously wish I had heard about this years ago.

Oh, wow this is so good. You say there is more of this somewhere? Hmm.

I notice the one word missing from Dumbledore's Words that first sorting feast was "nitwit", which is apparently what Malcador regards the Magos Biologis as being.

Many manly tears were shed in this chapter

This is a very enjoyable story that had me captivated till I ran out of chapters. I hope you will continue this story in the near future and consider maybe giving a few more chapters to this interlude you have created.

interesting. i think all of sailor moon's enemies will die... horribly.

interesting. is a warhammer and sailor moon fan
* looks embarassed*

Is... that strange?