Interesting, very funny at some points, but the over all plot was a little easy to figure out. In particular, I found it a little too obvious that Jamie was not as good as he seemed. Perhaps because you had the idea in your mind early on that Jamie was bad, but the way you write him, even in the first conversation, makes him seem bad. I also think that the twin was too easy to figure out, though initially I thought the suicide might have been faked, I did guess a twin was involved after the bar scene. I loved the story and it had good grammar and punctuation - surprising for a website like this - and it had me guessing about a lot of things, I didn't, for instance, guess the twin was mentally ill.

Exciting on several levels. Very nicely done.

Well done with a very good mystery and some really hot sex.

lmfaooo he sent it to mycroft omfg why but its so funny i cant
"Ex army doctor found dead with stiffy in British rail toilets" hahahahahha great chapter

oh,the lab! Such an amazing idea! :-) perfect present, indeed :-P and SH's mummy was like a lady from a magazine, truly posh and everything ;-) But Jamie..well, f*ck, this is horrible :-/

Still no idea, hmpf...maybe she keeps in touch with someone from red star boys? so she could know..but what is this for? blackmailing or what? did someone do anything to Freddy which made him commit suicide? this is so interesting! :-) :-P

Absolutely no idea here... Well, it seems I have to go on with reading - and I dont regret it at all, I really enjoy this story :-)

Oh, I started reading and now I realized I did not posted any review yet - its quite catchy! And really funny! :D God, this is a mess, poor John :-)) But he should have told it to Jamie, really...well, it seems that something revealing happens first...

That was incredibly hot. Oh, and well written..least we forget that ;)

You are incredible. I love your writting. can't wait to start Puffer Fish. Thanks for sharing.

I like the fun you are having with the 'boys'. Every so often you have a zinger at the end that leaves me LOL-ing.

Just thought I ought to let you know, your fanfics have me trying some "experiments" of my own. haha Should be interesting.

Double BAMF.

Another brilliant romp. Thanks so much for distracting me from work, my children, my husband and other important things...

I've been reading your fics for almost 12 hours now. 8'D You are an awesome writer, I hope you know that.

Another fantastic job!