Hi,
Just wanted to correct some french in your chapter 83 in your story as written bellow.
Firts I wrote what's satnading in your text and then the corrected version

sommes si passionnes pour etre ici dans Quiberon! nous sommes ravis d'être dans le Quiberon ce soir!
soir, nous aimerions vous obtenir sur vos pieds et aide nous obtient des choses balancant avec c'est notre temps Ce soir nous aimerions mettre de l'ambiance et vous faire danser en commençant avec C'est notre temps
3. Bien, cet a ete des depenses amusantes du soir avec vous tous Bien c'était sympa ce moment avec vous tous.
4. Kieran et je toujours termine nos spectacles en chantant notre propre chanson preferee Kieran et moi finissons toujours nos spectacles en chantant notre chanson préférée.
5. C'est de la premiere fois que nous avons rencontre, et comment dans qu'un moment magique, nous sommes tombes dans l'amour. Elle raconte notre première rencontre et comment, dans un moment magique, nous sommes tombés amoureux l'un de l'autre

Hope it might help you. Keep going with your stories, I love them! Thanks!

I enjoyed this story very much. It was really long, the longest I’ve ever attempted in fanfiction, I probably lost a few hours of sleep, but it was well worth it. It wasn’t so intense that I felt like I couldn’t put it down, but it wasn’t so boring that I wanted to give up on it, if that makes sense.

Pairings, I’m sure you have had a lot of complaints about the non cannon pairings, but they worked with the story and it’s not something that we would have known only reading the original seven HP books. I will say that the pairings started a little earlier, age wise, than I was expecting and they seemed to be very convenient pairings with very little of the normal teenage angst (not that I’m complaining about that pair, I would have quit reading if there had been too much unnecessary drama).

I loved your portrayal of Al. Loved him. There was nothing in the way that you wrote him that I can think to complain about.

Loved how Malcom was written.

I wasn’t thrilled about how Narcissa was portrayed in the beginning, but she was redeemed before the end, so good job there.

I guess that is all I can think to say on this, I’m going to try your other stories and see if I like them as much as this and it’s prequel.

This is the longest story I have ever read and after this chapter I am getting anxious to finish it and I’m so tempted to skip ahead to see if I can figure out who this new leader is.

Loved this chapter!

Oh, yes. You mess with the bull, you get the horns.

pls make more chapters, your work is awesome

I keep coming back to your stories. Thank you.

OMG! Awesome I’ve seen after the war but this this is a whole new level of FanFiction PS ARE YOU JK ROWLING! I’m serious are you

Thank you for your stories sections focused on abuse victims and survivors. I myself am an adult survivor. You have made me cry with your brutal honesty. Not enough is done and I dream of a day when no child or adult is left in an abusive home. God bless your show of compassion in this story.

The only thing that bugs me worse than the Dec.1,st money reports and buying clothes and toys just because they can is miss-spelling of the word "CANNON" as in the team name. Check your dictionary and you will find that the word "Canon" has a very different meaning. Otherwise a pretty good fic.

You have done a wonderful job with this story. I loved the whole thing from start to finish!

Just wondering why Jason and Brian, Amy and Millie's boyfriends can't visit on hogsmeade weekends

I loved this! I read your ‘Harry Potter Happily Ever After’ story many years ago and enjoyed it very much. I recently discover its sequel ‘Harry Potter The New Marauders’ and look forward to reading it as well. I was wondering if you could possible PM me a Weasley Family Tree for The New Marauders story. This would make it easier to read as your next generation characters are different to canon.
Keep on being a great storyteller and inspire us with your unique tales!

Wonderfully Written Story. I absolutely loved it. 14)3 chapters or wonderfull writing quality. Thank you so much for writing this. It really inspired me in many ways. 1,000,000,000,000 Likes!

Holy cow. This long!