Hope you will be back soon on this story !
Thanks for you work :)

The story doesn't feel complete. I think you should return to it after you finish ATE. After all, half of the things in ATE don't make sense, since you didn't complete this fix. I hope you return to it. I bet many people will love to see more

Hi, like many people on here I've really enjoyed your writing and was interested in how the book ends and get to the 19 years later. Like many I also wish you would finish this or at least give us snippets to follow it to the end! Do you think you will ever intend to finish this so long after you last wrote? I know your ATE should be done this month (July 2020) will you be coming back to this soon?

Hi I absolutely love this fan fiction but I thought that lavender was killed in the battle of Hogwarts

I think that you are using the word "brilliant" very much. You could choose to use other adjectives, because using this word over and over stands out a lot. Other words you might want to check are "rather" and "fairly", but yeah.
Please check this. Thanks!

The way ginny was reacting to harry's inheritance...I know she isn't one but it seems like the kind of thing a gold digger would do

Ron wakes Harry up at 8:15 in the morning 22 hours after the battle? Um did you even read the book the sun was just coming up when Harry defeated Voldemort so that would mean Harry slept for over 24 hours if it was 8:15. I know you only saw the movie,well the movies suck read the books they are a lot better. Yeah I know you don't read the reviews anymore it's been 5 years since you finished this.

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You should complete this book all the way to the Epilogue in Deathly Hallows

I think your writing is amazing but i am still comparing it to the Snitch Princess videos, but if Draco Malfoy is head boy at Hogwarts i think i might hate you for 5 secs :)

Nachdem ich alle 39 Kapitel in 7 Tagen gelesen habe, muss ich zugeben, dass dies die BESTE Fanfiction ist, die ich bisher gelesen habe. Also bitte, bitte BITTE führe dieses großartige, wunderbare Stück Freizeit für uns fort. Ich will wirklich wissen, wie es weitergeht. Ich liebe diese Story, die Art wie du schreibst und die vielen Kleinigkeiten. In dieser Story steckt so viel Liebe und wie man bei uns sagen würde "Herzblut". Ich kann nur hoffen, dass du diese wundervolle Arbeit fertig schreibst und freue mich auf das nächste Kapitel. An dieser Stelle: Danke für diese wundervolle Fanfiction.

After reading all 39 chapters in 7 days I have to admit that this is THE BEST fanfiction i have ever read. So please, please, PLEASE continue this great, beautiful peace of "spare-time" for us. I really want to know, how this story. I really Need to know, how the story goes on. I love this Story, the style of your writing and the many Details. You have put so much Love, or as I would say "Herzblut" in it.
I can only hope, that you will continue to write (this story) and I am Looking Forward to read the next chapter. At this Point: Thank you for this Wonderful fanfiction.

PS: Yes, English is not my mothertongue.

As stated in the books, Harry isn’t those kind of lovey-dovey person, I don’t think Ginny is too, so in my opinion, I think it’s better if they don’t say, “I love you” too frequently. Also, I don’t really like the fact that Harry’s Patronus is a stallion and his Animagus form is a dog. Normally, your Animagus form will take the form of your Patronus. The only reason why I think Harry’s Patronus was supposed to be a Stag was because you see, Nymphadora Tonks’ Patronus changed into the Form of a werewolf (Remus Lupin) because she was deeply in love with him but he kept trying to push her away, saying that he was too old and poor for her. This made her love him even more, so basically, her Patronus took the shape of Remus’s. As stated in Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows, when Harry, Ron and Hermione apparated to Hogsmeade to destroy the last and final Horcrux, the Death Eaters came and sent Dementors after them. They were under the invisibility cloak but they’re feet could be seen by the Death Eaters. As you should know, invisibility cloaks never work on dementors, so Harry has to use a Patronus Charm to drive away those Dementors and stop them from sucking out their souls. A silver stag burst out of his wand, and at the time, he was still in love with Ginny, and he knew that Ginny was also in love with him. His Patronus should always be a Stag. As for the Animagus, it should be a Stag too, since Mcgonagall’s Patronus was a cat and her Animagus was a cat too.

I'm so sad that this fanfic isn't finished. I loved the action and the non-action in the story. When Harry spent money every week on Ginny getting her presents in the first year, I said to myself "We get it you're rich" every time he spent money. I love the danger that comes out of nowhere when you least expect it. I don't think that Hary Animagus would be a Cavalier King Charles Spaniel, which has no relation to Harry whatsoever. I think it should have been a Snowy Owl, like Hedwig since she was the closest animal that Harry loved. Also, I don't think that Harry could fit or would get an entire Quidditch pitch in their backyard. Speaking of Quidditch I did love the new moves that were invented by Ginny and Harry, also the Firestorm broom was a brilliant touch to the Quidditch action. Harry's power boost after Voldemort defeat is probably more likely since Harry wasn't one of Voldemort's Horcruxes anymore. I thought the point of view on the whole story brought the story more home to the HP fans that we all are. Plus it was interesting flipping from Ginny's perspective to Harry's to Ron's to Hermione's. I wish you will finish the story at least until the battle after Ginny gives birth.

I’ve just read all 39 chapters in about 2 weeks! Really brilliant all the way through, the was hooked! I especially love how ridiculously powerful Harry becomes and the confrontations when he shows it. Graveyard scene was a personal favourite! HOWEVER, I’m all psyched up for the attack on Ginny now and what Harry’s going to do to Rolando, and now I’m stuck. Great work! I’ll be checking out your other stories now too!

you forgot to describe Ginny's dress