Story kept me going I guess, but I feel like the characters strayed a lot from their cannon personalities. Also, if you’re looking for a fanfic that centers on katniss and peeta, this isn’t it. There’s a bunch of original characters and the story line focuses heavily on them. It’s fine, but it’s a risky thing to do if your audience is a crowd of people who have no interest in other characters. Anyways, all around it was a good read, but I wouldn’t reread it again

love this so far! can't believe it's been 10 years since you started this, meaning you probs won't even see this

No offense but this was an absolutely awful ending

Love this story and the way Katniss and Peeta got closer without games... And I loved their role and all in fighting against Snow & Co.

Why didn't they kill Snow? Or kidnap hovercraft, anything really?

I know the ending was abrupt but props for finishing your story.

Poor Lira. I suspected they would try to hijack her.

Poor Gale. I'm glad he and Peeta had a good conversation. It's heartbreaking what's happening to Rue and Lira.

It's so painful.

Poor Rue and Lira. It's heartbreaking. Rue never should have been there. But they finally kissed. Seriously it took them long enough.

Those two are so dense. Poor Rue. Chaff didn't deserve that.

This Quell is even worse than canon. Katniss is talking about killing herself. That's not good.

Poor Rue.

Yay Cinna! I definitely think Gale might like Lira.

Ajax is so annoying. The propos are actually kind of funny. I wonder how much was genuine and how much was made up.