| Reviews for Foreign Invaders |
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Hazmatt chapter 8 . 9/29/2014 Great story! I really enjoyed it! |
dreameralways chapter 8 . 1/19/2014 There should be a sequel to this (ignoring the time-line change of course). It was lovely but they never got to compare notes, like how Reid and Olivia both have eidetic memories and Peter actually has a higher IQ. Not sure how to work that in, but it seems like it should be discussed. Personally, I now have it in my head that Reid was another cortexiphan kid, that's where he got his eidetic memory. Maybe someday I'll write it, who knows. |
RLS83843 chapter 8 . 12/23/2013 But you didn't say what the bad guys were doing. You need to work on this some more. |
RLS83843 chapter 5 . 12/23/2013 Every character doesn't have to be in every scene |
RLS83843 chapter 2 . 12/23/2013 IF Mrs. Reyes hadn't been notified, Hotch and Prentiss would have been surprised and uncomfortable. |
RLS83843 chapter 1 . 12/23/2013 Olivial only lived in Jackson for a while. She is a military brat. They move a lot. |
Hazmatt chapter 3 . 6/5/2012 Great chapter! I really enjoyed it! I hope everything works out! |
Hazmatt chapter 2 . 6/4/2012 Great chapter! I really enjoyed it! I hope everything works out! Walter and Reid were awesome together! |
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 6/4/2012 Great chapter! I really enjoyed it! I hope everything works out! |
Robert chapter 1 . 3/26/2012 I have a feeling that this would be better as an X Files Fringe crossover |
oursong553 chapter 6 . 4/19/2011 Loved Olivier part in chapter 6. Everyone seems to be in character |
oursong553 chapter 2 . 4/19/2011 I love in chapter 2 how you put all three geniuses in one group. They all have really high IQ's |
oursong553 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011 Chapter one was good. I hope you right more of these. |
cflat chapter 7 . 3/26/2011 So glad they're rescued. As for the suggestion, I was thinking, maybe Reid vs. Walter chess match? Also, I don't remember, is this set in season 2? Cause I was thinking it would be interesting if the BAU worked with the Fringe team again, but with Fauxlivia there. |
NicknHotchfan chapter 7 . 3/25/2011 This is good. I'm glad Rossi and the teams find them before they get caught. Hotch and Emily together, Hotch did said, "You look nice." I hope the doctor give him something to get rid of the drugs in his body. |