Intresting idea I like the though the Team go and Team impossible had brawels about superheroing

I imagine their first impressions being something like this. Nice fic idea :).

Hi

Great one-shot

The quality is very good. Good narration, dialog, interaction, drama and humor.

Shego and Drakken (regardless of the short appearance) were fantastic, and very in character.

The shot featuring Drakken and Shego (before they met Kim) and learn about a cheerleader who did something impossible in the headlines was great. Shego’s subconscious apprehension, and the imagination of confronting this cheerleader and showing her who is supreme was very amusing and in character.

Drakken’s typical egoism and banter fit him very well.

The wholesome standards are high.

The language is clean.

Nothing is suggestively offensive.

No extreme violence or any other vile content.

I hope this review brightens your day. God bless.

Data Seeker

hehe, cool intro :3

This was funny! Especially when you look at how long Shego spent to do what Kim did in seconds. Kim's bad-a** :)

I really enjoyed this. Liked the Casandra moment that Shego wouldn't share with Drakken. Good dynamic between them as well.

Good one shot. And I don't think shego ever spoke truer words.

Think you hit the nail right on the head. Bravo.

Reader101w,

What a great little story. Dad and I agree with KIY that it could be written a little tighter but your use of foreshadowing future events is very well done. Of course foreshadowing is a very hard writing art form but you do it quite well as you give hints about things to come in later in the series from a past perspective. For some writers the use of this form can be very broad and easily understood, or it may be a complex use of symbols, that are then connected to later turns in the story. For your first time out, again, well done. Well done indeed.

Thanks for the read.

ja and kt

And their lives would never be the same... LOL!

CB73

A nice bit of foreshadowing here. We all know that Shego's words will come back to haunt her someday.

Very nice. My only complaint might be based on an imperfect memory. I don't think he would have forgotten a friend like James Possible, but I seem to recall him thinking there were probably a lot of Possibles out there and the odds were against them being related.

I might have had an, "I knew a Possible."

"Maybe they're related."

"I doubt it. It's a common name."

"It's not a common name."

"Yes it is."

"If you ever meet her you can ask."

"Don't be silly. What are the chances we'd ever meet her?"

Of course, I'd have been padding to try and get the story length to exactly a thousand words.

KiY

Haha. Very nice here, Reader!

Man, if they only knew.

Nice prequel.