That was so corny and bad. The only thing that would make it better would be a few funny typos. Update please!

I looked at Toyota's name, and I was like "Dude, that's a car! Two, really." I loved that, that was a mix of clever and unoriginal. :D

That chapter was too funny. But why did you make Leo kill Splinter? That's not cool.

omggggg this is AWESUM LOL! ur ocs r so neat i can ttly rel8 to dem!1 they r liek ttly made 4 da turtles. and ya splintah is a jerk. dats y i kill him off alot lol. _

next dey shuld all go on A Date n den kirai cumz along n dey kill her!y1w! karia is SUCH a prep n stuff.

*coughs* Update soon, okay? ;)

Hey, that was great.

"She was beginning to fall in love with Don even though they didn't know each other that well. That had to mean they belonged together."

Are either of them werewolves, by any chance? Oops. Wrong franchise.

"His sole mission in life was to train his sons in ninjitsu to avenge his master's death and forbid them to be happy. "

I don't know why everybody's so down on Splinter for that. Sounds like the average parent to me.

"Below that was a picture of the Foot symbol, though they didn't know what it meant."

I was honestly picturing a photograph of a foot taped at the bottom of the page.

Good job.