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alicia chapter 3 . 5/4 I loved reading this story! I'm not an Edward fan so it was nice to read something that made me interested in what he thought. I'm about to check with fingers crossed that you have more works up! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/20/2019 Probably you do not know tvtropes. There are people who feel sorry about your other fanfics not being on line. I read your other story about Charlie Swan and it is a real story with a plot and so i started reading this one which is a real story too. Please do not take it off line. o.o |
Guest chapter 3 . 4/28/2018 oh goodness. that was incredible. part of me was hoping edward and caden would end up together but I like the ending you gave them. Gosh that was amazing. |
Meilinfan chapter 3 . 4/18/2018 Why didn’t I discovered this fic sooner? (Thanks Tvtropes) I kind of dislike Twilight because it is soo cheesy, Edward and Bella are so in love that I feel their life resolve around it. I’m so glad to see the evolution of Edward with this fic! Hope you will soon post the sequel |
the-dandiest-of-lions chapter 2 . 10/15/2017 I love this so much. Your writing is amazing and I adore Caden, and I actually like your Edward. I also find myself feeling sorry for Bella, which is weird because she is one of the most unlikeable protagonists I've ever come across. I like how ten years have passed since Breaking Dawn, and I think because of that your Edward's characterisation works - even though Smeyer said vampires' mental states never change (lol as if), he'd have settled a little. Fantastic work. Also thank you for making Edward's new sort-of-relationship not a straight one. There are lots of fics where he's paired with female OCs but I think exploring his sexuality and attraction is really interesting. |
the-dandiest-of-lions chapter 1 . 10/15/2017 I love this omg |
Athena's phoenix chapter 3 . 8/27/2017 D*mn. This is is brilliant. Hooray for character depth! :D |
Guest chapter 3 . 6/30/2017 Awwwwww! Btw where's the sequel?! |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/30/2017 I really was not expecting a slash paring with this but woah! Poor Edward |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2017 This is beyond brilliant and hilarious! The idea of any of them in a college dorm with roommates is so absurd but funny. |
meezzy chapter 3 . 6/15/2017 Hi! I just wanna say that you write beautifully - hilarious and in-character! As an Anti, I love how you gently poke fun of the characters while still keeping them as themselves - no easy feat! It really shows your skill as an author. Caden is also a really good original character - not too perfect and annoying but with his own undeniable charm. Great job! I came across you on TvTropes' page ( /FanficRecs/Twilight) and was wondering if I could read your old works that you have deleted? (Seven, Eighteen, Chagrin, Imprisoned, Daughter) This is my first time doing this, but I was just too captivated by your writing. However, I completely understand if you do not wish me to read those stories :) Do drop me a PM if you want to and I look forward to the sequel. Keep on rockin'! |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/25/2016 What a lovely story. Midlife crisis indeed. "Although there was one particularly awful fight in 1964 when we didn't speak to each other for the year. How you never noticed that remains a mystery to me." Amazing. I look forward to the sequel, if you're still planning on writing it! |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/10/2016 I'm not a Twilight fan, and I've never read their fanfiction (until this one that is!) but I think you seriously brought character to Edward, and I think Caden was an awesome chap (imo I would have loved it if bella stayed out of the picture and edward and caden continued their friendship, and slowly developed it into a relationship) but yes I think you've managed to take the picture perfect relationship a step deeper :) thank you! |
eacox1787 chapter 3 . 2/3/2016 This story was beautiful, I hope you start the sequel soon. |
Alexandra Vupre chapter 3 . 1/20/2016 I can't get over this. The character developement is amazing. I've read this for the fourth time now. Cant't this be canon? |