sweet story, it is a shame with your concord mistakes like when you write "He was tired but he know he wouldn't sleep tonight." when it should have been knew instead of know. but keep up the good work and you'll improve

This is such a beautiful story :') I'm a big Lily/Remus fan, and this is one of the best I've read. Keep up the good work!

Awww, poor Remus! :( I loved this though.