Ah such mysterious things are good for the soul

Beautiful story, beautifully told. No one can blame her for wanting nothing to do with the egotistical dogs. Both think they own or should own her, as if she were a toy or a tool. Sometimes a woman just wants to get lost in a dance, free of claims and efforts to control or capture her. I hope she finds a happy life far away.

Omg! Love it! Please continue the story!

Oh men why it always the writers cut the good stories u and live you hanging
Buhuhu

Nice one. Really enjoyed it. Especially, because there isn't the happy end, so often seen with this pairing. That, even tough determined, Sesshoumaru didnn't get what he wanted. And how Kagome wasn't the victim (not entirely at least) but an equal strong character.
Just out of interest I went to look for the Sequel. Sure it would have been fun to read.
Finally... there is one question I've alwasy been curious about: How come, Kagomes eyes are blue in so many english fanfictions? (Though I guess it's not only the english ones.) Is there a special reason to it?

OMG, where IS the sequel? I LOVE this. I totally want to see Sesshomaru chase her; there's never enough of those. I want them to meet and for Kagome to play hard to get and be annoyed with how persistent he is to have her. I almost want her to be mean. But please, sequel.

yesss

to be continue?

If a sequel is not done soon, I'm going to cry.

Sequel? Please?

This first chapter is highly intriguing; I can't wait to find out what's going to happen! Also, I really like your choice of words in this chapter - your descriptions contian lots of beautiful details that makes everything feel real.

this is not an ending this is mostly a climactic event... with no resolution...

the story was great aside from it not having an ending.

ahh, i like it very much! Do you plan to write a sequel soon? Oh, I want to know what Sesshoumaru is going to do in order to find Kagome and how he is going to court her!

Waaaaaaas :( where is the sequel? Great story so far...please get inspired soon and let your readers enjoy a sequel .

It was short but intense! Excited about the sequel. :)

I really liked this story, I feel like it has the true essence of Inuyasha/Kagome: he always loved her but maybe not enough to fight to keep her, and yet taking as much as she was willing to give.