Beautiful poem. Cute one shot.

You know, I really liked this one. Rory and Logan didn't magically end up together at the end but you made it seem as if one day in the future they would just not now because even if the miss and still love eachother, they did break up... Good job , I really liked it! It's was realistic:)

that was great loved it

That was amazing. Please tell me there is more!

i love this story! can you please continue with it

that was a nice and polite follow up to the disastrous finale. Short and sweet!

hey great story! I definately think that you shouldn't keep it as a oneshot, its really good and deserves to be continued. Again, good job and keep writing!

Aw yay they can be civil to each other. I never liked how Logan gave up, even though I'd rather that Rory be with a certain leather jacket wearing guy. Great job letting them actually talk about their problems!

Excellent, this could definately be more...hint hint! Great job

Nice! I really enjoyed it (:

Good work.

Great story please update soon

I like it. It's short and self contained and it works very nicely.