| Reviews for Targets |
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forie-mi chapter 1 . 5/5/2004 Fantastic! Just one question who's Hannah? Anyways don't let her hurt my little Beni! I love the story write more soon please! |
Anon chapter 1 . 1/13/2003 Poor Beni! Great story! |
Brunette chapter 1 . 6/12/2002 Hilarious! Occupational Hazards is my favorite story, so I really liked this one, as well. Write some more about Rick, Hannah, and Beni's time in the Legion. Fav lines: Rick:"I just like to be cautious." Hannah:"Since when?" Beni:"Since he gave you ammunition." Hannah: "Oh, I can play nice." Beni: "And most of Algeria knows it." Beni: "Don't tell me you are actually giving her weaponry?" Hannah: "He had to. I broke too many heels on your thick skull." Rick: "Just pretend the target is Beni, okay?" Beni: "I suppose the thought of leaving me ALONE ever occured to you?" |
Julie Horwitz chapter 1 . 3/4/2002 I loved it! This story is hilarious! Go Hannah! Too bad that target wasn't really Beni! Keep up the great work! |
Riley Johnson chapter 1 . 3/3/2002 good story. it's funny how beni and hannah act like "children" while rick tries to stop them. |