Loved it, but this story should have been called: Unnecessary Drama... drops mic.

thank you for ur beautiful story ;D

This... This is terrible. Why would you write this? N

Gil is going to do some ass kicking and FRancis is going to profit from the sidelines. :) LOL

I just realized... When I looked at the title of this page it said: Unnecessary Chapter

Lol!

... So this is the end?...

AAAAAWWWW!

Caro, This is so cute! -Everything you do, I swear, I will die of cuteness overload, if that even fucking exists.-

It's really nice and I love it. I think you captured the two's , erm, Love very nicely. : ) It's sweet and the kind of thing that I'm sure girls like.

Except for that one Rachel Bitch. If I were there. Damn. "You're such a stupid BITCH~ Girl, Don't you know you're a BITCH~? :D" All the time to her. But she deserved it.

Also, yay~ No Rape~ "Kids, Rape is Baaaaad~"

But It's not rape if you yell surprise.

SURPRISE~~

I'VE READ THIS BEFORE, I HAVE~ And I never knew it was you? Oh damn. I love this. So much. Partly because of the creeper radar, but because it's so awesome. yay~!

I really love this story but you need to improve on the spelling. It becomes a bit painful to read something misspelled. Like this:

"Um... Feli..." Nam began, ut was interrupted by the angry statement ofLovina.

"LIke I'll marry a tomato bastard like him!"

When it should be like this:

"Um... Feli..." Nam began, but was interrupted by the angry statement of Lovina.

"Like I'll marry a tomato bastard like him!"

Other than that the story rocks! Yeah but if it's your computer or keyboard fucking this up then I totally understand.

/sobs sadly

WHY IS IT OVERRR. ;A;

I look forward to more of your stories :)

ah...WHAT KIND UP MESSED UP SCHOOL IS THIS?

Ivan... I should of saw that coming!

Awww! I love this story/chapter! It was so cute! I am really going to miss this story!

Thanks for the update! I was sad to see it was the last chapter, but exited to read what happened.

I think you meant wouldn't, not would, here: "and she hefted the bag of groceries in her arm high so that it would slip from her grasp..." (-_)

I think you mean back, not backside... What she sits on isn't a particularly good place to describe as sunburnt...

Spain is such a creeper.

Feli and Lovi are so cute~

I'm glad you wrote this story! Bye for now,

-Silvermoon

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwww~~~~~~~~~~~~ SO CUTE! Thanks for thanking! I feel special. Is it already going to end soon... *sad* but it has been great while it was going on!

awesome story