Ven and Roxas better be rescued soon, or Nomura is gonna get it!

the story was very well done for so little dialogue, and it astounds me.

A paradise prison, hmm...

It really is one for Roxas, huh. For one that was screaming how he wanted his life back, the way you've written him here is making me ponder on their reunion, lol. He has Ven there, at least.

...although I imagine that there isn't much room for conversation between them, if this story is any indication xD

Oh that was so sad.

At least Roxas has company. Between Sora, Roxas, Xion, and Ven, they shouldn't get lonely.

...This is awesome...and so deep, I really like your writing style. :D Keep up the good work! x3