But...Ash is not even 18...I can agree with shipping but..

An AMAZING Idea!

i love pokemon make another one

I didn't think it was a corny ending. In fact, I thought it was great! I've read many other stories involving ash and misty, but I'd say this is one of my top five favorites.

This story is a little OOC and a bit rushed, but nothing that can't be fixed. Try getting a beta (I think that that's what it's called); I hear that a lot of authors have a beta and it improves their writing plenty, although your most grammar and your spelling were correct. Just so you know, this is not a flame (I do not enjoy flaming people; only improving ones' writing skills), just constructive criticism. Keep writing :)

This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.

I likes the story but Felt It was a little too rushed into... Anyways KEEP MAKING STORIES

It was not corney in fact it was interesting

corny i agree but for ur first this is very good my first fanfic is no where good compared to urs so keep up ur writing :)

if they made love and its a year l8r, the baby shud b 3 months old and cannot talk so well.

Well, yeah it was corny. But it was also your first story, so I comend you for trying your best. However, it did need some help.

Why do Ash and Misty need to become Pokemon to be able to move again? And Why Legendary Pokemon of all things? Wouldn't Normal Pokemon be easier?

And how can Latias turn them into Pokemon? The again, she can turn human, so I guess you can get away with it. It needs work, but not super bad. Certainly better than my first fanfic.

Keep it up, and don't quit!