hey, I really enjoyed this! I have to admit I did a little fan girl squeel at the Paisley Uni bit (I'm from Paisley!)

Please write some more!

XD

hey liked the chapter, but alex is nineteen, james bond lost his virginity at 16,

just saying - teenage hormones are powerful things,

please dont think me weird, just saying what i think,

anyway - i'm hooked!

heyhey,

alright i have to say, fantastic beginning!

i loved the alex rider series, but was a little dissapointed by croc tears.

i think that horowitz created great characters, and i think that you could create really dramatic and emotional situations using alex and sabina. like in eagle strike, although i didn't think that was that well done.

all im saying is that i think if you can get a good storyline, you could really write a good fanfiction.

keep at it!