Lovely story with intriguing characters. I'm not terribly familiar with the G1 mythology, but it was easy to follow despite the complexity of the plot and kept my interest until the very end. Nice work.

Heya, finally got through all 17 chapters. I was having a little trouble reading it, I think because of the flow or the way you formatted it.. not sure to be honest. Overall though it was interesting. Now I have a bit better understanding of Nova via her past. I was wondering if you planned on doing more with her, perhaps following her adventures on the mush. Be interesting to read some of her thoughts as she interacts with everyone.

I love it when OCs are written with actual personalities, rather than just the authors inserting parodies of themselves and then pretending that they're not. So for that, I thank you.

Now, about the fic itself. I finished reading it, and I kid you not, the first word that came to mind to describe what I had read was "adorable". I think something is seriously wrong with me. XD Or perhaps it was just that last scene... I don't know.

But regardless, I really enjoyed reading this. X3 It was dark, and violent, and full of action. It had interesting situations and even more interesting characters. You wrote it wonderfully well, and once again I'll thank you for being original.

And now I'm off to read more of your stuff! 3

Finally getting around to reading this. XD Skipped over it before because I wasn't in the mood for a long fic.

Note on this chapter, the end cuts off:

"Nothing much. Just that if I were you, I wouldn't

And that's how it ends.

Interesting. One of the most wholly evil - and unsympathetic - characters I've seen anyone write here. A Decepticon who tried to convince themselves they were no longer one, and failed. I can see this one going far in Megatron's twisted world... nicely written. Sounds like watching her ascension (and descending still further into evil) will be intriguing...