how cool its diffent so keep it coming

Please update soon, I want to see what happens next.

I think the story is good but I was a bit confused at first. I didn't realize just how much gap in the timeline in each chapter would be w

On the other hand, the sentence structure (which is important for me) is good. I just feel a bit weirded out whenever I read Seshoumaru's sentences filled with 'this Sesshoumaru' since I don't read a lot of Sesshoumaru-based fanfics XD

Interesting..Proceed or else! :D