great

Haha wtf Theodore shut up! Ruining their moment. Anyways, cuuuuuteee! xD I loved it

This was always one of my favorite Fanfic's short, sweet, simple. And Awesome!

HAHAHAHA loved ending. I liked it more as a chipmunk story then I would have liked it as a artemis foul story.

Great story! :)

*highfives Theodore*

atta boy Theo! X3

That was adorable.

And to be honest when I read the summary I had the "upside down smile" that my cousin and I laugh at. The one where you kind of don't want to/didn't expect to smile.

The way Alvin explained his feelings was cute. Inside-out shirts, lost in his neighborhood, almost crashing his car. I like how it was a kind of gradual build-up to him realizing his feelings. Very believable.

Oh man, the phrase, "I think I've come down with love" was amazingly well thought of. I don't think I have ever heard it put like that.

The banter between Alvin and Brittany was really well done. The comment about flannel made me think of Smallville. XD Loved it.

Simon making fun of Alvin was fun to read. Shows just how close they really are. Theodore popping out of the trunk at the end made me laugh, because although Alvin warned Brit (and us, the readers) I still didn't think it would happen! D Nice.

Anyway, I guess one of the best things about this was that it didn't end with a kiss. It would have just seemed misplaced, to me. Trying to rush the story and the character's relationship. The hand-holding was made so much more significant, I think.

I love the story and I think it's one for my fav's list. Thanks for the great read!

xoxo

I thought that it was an okay story. I liked it. Not really my style but... I liked it.

D'awww! How cute. :D

I loved this story lmfao.

It sounds JUST like something Alvin would do.

And the insult Brittany through at him made me crack up laughing. Why? Idk! Just did! lol.

Write again really soon. [:

xD Theodore popping out of the trunk was funny

I liked it )