Reading through this, I couldn't help but think of a 7 sins challenge xD

Vanitas certainly wants it all huh.

I really love your writing btw, how you can write something without much (or none at all) dialogue

In the beginning I was like,"Oh, this is gunna be cute..." Then, when I reached the end...let's say my face resembled: O.e.

Well, it IS Vanitas, and it does fit him. GOOD JOB!:D

aw, that was cute~ i really love the poetic similies/metaphors! this is definitely a new faovirte of mine. ;D

Aw,poor little Ven...

Wait,you mean Vanitas wanna rape Ven so he'll lose his innocence?

I really wish that will be the truth.

That was nice and dark. : ) It definitely fits Vanitas' desire to unite with Ventus. Great job!

I haven't even got BBS yet, but what you've got here is exactly what I imagine Vanitas to be like :D Nice work here, immediate fave from me.

Ooh! Dark!

But fitting. Well written too. I have a feeling this is EXACTLY what he wanted during the game

Very nice. I love Vanitas (I always love the villains) and this was perfect. He captured his crazy evil persona to a 'T'.

I look forward to more:)

i like this. and i like the jk too. sorry poor Ven XD