Reviews for A Magical Effect
WhiteElfElder chapter 2 . 4/23
Harry should have put a bullet or done some slow acting spell on Albert Lawson, because leaving him alive will come back to bite him.
BrightSkywalker chapter 2 . 4/5
I'm so proud, yet so disappointed in your Harry. And I think the real Hermione would be too...

But damn it if you don't write well :)
R chapter 2 . 12/16/2017
That was pathetic. Centuriea of experience, use odlf magic, and he BARELY takes down Miranda.

Pass.
Uzushiogakure chapter 1 . 10/30/2017
Worthless absolutely worthless can't believe I wasted my time on this shit.
MattKennedy chapter 2 . 10/24/2017
Very interesting story. :)
shadow chapter 2 . 8/6/2017
I liked the chapter!1
Infernus est in animo chapter 1 . 8/8/2016
Yeah, haven't updated in a while... Ya think.
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2016
SO he is not only asshole but albo psychopath
concept human chapter 2 . 6/22/2016
Well your story isn't lacking in action that is for sure.

I could understand the characterization of your Potter considering the betrayals and his longevity. It is actually rare to see a properly jaded Potter in this site. Too bad it is abandoned when it only began.

8/10
1529 chapter 2 . 5/8/2016
I had high hopes on starting this story, even though it was abandoned, but the author created a despicable character with few, if any, redeeming characteristics.

Not wanting to be a hero (as the author phrased it) is different from being willing to be a guard at Auschwitz... and that is the Harry that this story developed.
Azeroth the Second chapter 1 . 12/27/2015
The Quarians made the Geth sentient and when one asked if they had a soul the Quarians attacked them. I don't blame the Geth for running them off the planet.
DDay chapter 2 . 5/13/2015
Harry seems to be a stupid and useless thug. I just can't seem to care about him. He should just blow his own head off.
Xanathos chapter 2 . 4/26/2015
I very much enjoyed this story. Yes Joker in an armored mech suit would be awesome. NOT an atlas though, unless it's modified to not have a window(too easy to snipe the driver and then get control of it for yourself).
ww1990ww chapter 2 . 2/9/2015
It's the most sad thing that this story is abandoned. Your Harry is powerful but at the same time he is only human with big amount experiance but only with this.

Why I have this starnge feeling that in the end Harry might end with Miranda but before ME 2 he might hunt for Archangel.
SonOfNenji chapter 2 . 12/7/2014
I would have have stopped reading this if Hary had no mercy, but so far you've done a good job.

I hope Keiji lives, actually. Good ways to endear himself to Shepard's crew all around.

Adious till ch.3!

-N
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