The way you write is incredible. I love how their relationship slowly develops, no rush, no sudden jerks into action. Your characterization of Snape in love is simply brilliant

That was a really nice fanfiction
So much emotions
And your words were so beautiful
Thank you so much

Aww, thanks. I was emotional during whole fanfic. Fancy writing a sequel?
Btw my dream cast of this fanfic: Albus Dumbledore - Michael Gambon
Hermione Granger-Emma Watson
Ron Weasley - Rupert Grint
Harry Potter-Daniel Radcliffe
Sirius Black- Gary Oldman
Severus Snape- Alan Rickman
Remus Lupin - Victor Garber

Hi. Thank you for sharing your story. It was great until chapter eight or so and then it became too much sentimentality and also Snape wouldn't miss someone after only one day because he's an adult. It just became very out of character and too emotional.

So, I finally managed to read the last few chapters of your story.

I really liked how you expressed Severus's emotions in those chapters. Very beautifully written.

In the end, I shared Severus's emotions... I had to cry, it was too much for me ;_;

Thank you again for this story. Nevermind that my heart is broken, I still loved it very very much.

I hope that I'll find time soon to read "The journey", because it seems I need to shatter my heart completely *lol*

Cheers,

Timelady

PS: You're German? Hello neighbour! I'm Austrian :D

Not long until I've finished reading this story, so I thought I should leave you a little review.

I usually don't read slash, because it's mostly too sappy imho, but I absolutely adore your fanfic!

The Snupin couple has always fancinated me, and it saddens me that there are so little fanfics out there about those two... My other OTP Snamione has so many great ones and I think it's a shame that SS/RL doesn't get more attention.

The fact that your fanfic is so amazingly well-written makes up for that fact! I don't know if you'll hear from me soon because I'm always way too busy, but I just wanted to let you know that you're doing an amazingly great job and I'm very thankful for this story.

I might also read 'The Journey', but I'm not sure, if my heart is ready for such grief yet (yes, I might have peeked into the last chapter...).

Anyway, thank you so much for this story! It will definitely go on my Favourites list.

Cheers

Timelady

Loved the talk between them. It was very well-written . I am really into this pairing now.

I can imagine it being frustrating having that kind of hate/attraction to someone you have to see all the time. Remus and Severus' relationship in canon was also so interesting and tragic to me. So a fanfic like this is exactly what I want for two of my favorite HP characters.

Severus' temper tantrum and inner dialogue were well written. I love your take on Remus' kill him with kindness approach to Severus. I have always found their relationship interesting.

I looked on your profile for the sequel. First thing I saw: Completed: Yay! Second thing I saw: over 600k words: OoO oh my gosh. That is amazing! Why did I have to find this during finals week!? T.T Looking forward to reading it while procrastinating and afterwards during my break ;)

... *cries* I've literally been crying over the last few chapters. Lupin's love speech was beautiful in this chapter...

It just makes me uncomfortable... that for Remus... everything seems to be split between Snape and Sirius. Even after sex, first important thing they talk about... Sirius! The problem is... even before Remus suspected Sirius' innocence, he was covering for Sirius by hiding the animagus form as well as the secret pathway. What rankled most I guess, was that Remus wanted Snapes' trust the whole time he was lying and hiding really important (and potentially life-threatening) information.

In the midst of such an important/fragile moment, Remus still tires to get information about his suspicions (about Sirius) out of Severus... why Remus, why...

Wow! This story is so good! I can't believe that English is not your first language! Good romances like that are so rare! And I must add that good romances rated T are the rarest of all. I'm so happy I found this gem! I can't wait to go read your other stories.

I can't tell you what is my favourite chapter because I would need to re-read the whole story to know but I can tell you that the vanishing step is my favourite moment. Every time it was mentioned afterwards, I remembered and it made me all happy again.

dammit dumbles cockblocking is not cool