Reviews for The Little Captain
DreamOnClouds chapter 55 . 11/25/2015
I read this, and ever single chapter i ended up crying. It was just so beautiful. The descriptions were great, your writing is wonderful...I really don't understand why you don't have more reviews.
Frozen Meatballs chapter 55 . 12/11/2014
I'd like to say that every single story within this fic is very unique and very well written. Although to be honest, I did not enjoy those below chapter 12 because I don't know. I suppose I just couldn't feel them. I'd see the silver lining in it though as it means you have improved over time (in my standards at least). I think I've had my fair share of opinions with most of the chapters but I couldn't review because I read this with the fanfiction app offline mode though I do remember some that stuck to me.

One would be that chapter where it was too sad that I just couldn't help reading a certain line thrice. It's the chapter with the ice statue and the line would be Hyourinmaru's speech about Hitsugaya noted it to be the longest(?) one the zanpaktou said since his bankai. It broke my heart with how the mighty Hyourinmaru would break down like that! Gosh.

Next would be my most favourite. The chapter where Rangiku pointed out how Hyourinmaru was such a handsome zanpakutou to catch the eye of the female zans. I suppose the reason behind this is because it's the most humorous chapter for me and I've always wanted a story about Hitsugaya knowing that his zan is such a girl magnet XD.

Another chapter would be the one where Hitsugaya said that earning his zanpakutou was simply what he wanted. As a devoted Hitsugaya fans for the past 9 years, I've probably read every single story about Hitsugaya and acquiring Hyourinmaru/Bankai (in ffnn) All the impressions they gave me was there was a dragon inside him that will, without second thoughts, devour him alive if he did no tame it. Hyourinmaru, in companion dragon standards, is a very considerate creature so much the thought of him of trying to overpower Hitsugaya as if he was to take over the world is just wut.

I also loved that HyouTobi chapter. Tobiume's submission to the fact that Hitsugaya is only Hyourinmaru's 'home is where the heart is'is just heartbreaking.

There. I might not have contributed much but I hope this long ass review can compensate.

P. S. I laughed at many of you A/Ns XD

All the best.
Sharpay chapter 11 . 11/6/2014
I love this one. I dont know, some of the stuff here is so sad and deep. Kinda relatable
Noitamina chapter 55 . 7/25/2014
I know it's been a while since you've updated this, but everyone would love for you to! This is so good!
Elise chapter 55 . 7/17/2014
Great, amazing collection of drabbles. :)
asamiruria chapter 55 . 7/8/2013
This. Is. THE BEST. Fanfiction I have ever read. I swear. You portrayed Toshiro and Hyourinmaru both perfectly, their relationships and personalities. Also, Rangiku and Momo and their Zanpakutos! Definitely going on my favourites list. Keep writing!
ThreeKittiesDancing chapter 55 . 6/27/2013
I'm so happy to see a new vignette from you, thanks for updating! This was beautifully done, so thoughtful, yet heartbreaking. Poor Toushiro, thrust into such a world of pain at such a young age, your observations make things even more poignantly clear about what he has been put through. Sometimes I just wish he could be spared such atrocities in his "afterlife", and leave the Gotei 13 behind before he has to suffer even more. It's not like he had a very happy life in the world of the living, having died so young. Toushiro is such a remarkable character, but he's had to go through far too much pain for one so young.

I hope you can update again for us soon! Whatever strikes your fancy...but is there a chance it could be something lightherted? How about something on how Toushirou copes with/beats the summer heat? Maybe explain why there were such late, bizarre snowstorms ravaging the country long into this year's Spring, (Toushiro doing some awesomely wicked training in the area, or someone made him monumentally mad while he was on vacation, etc.). Well, they're only hopeful hints, I'll be happy with whatever you decide to write next!
im-aggressive chapter 55 . 6/26/2013
Very forceful and thoughtful writing, amazing job.
Corisanna chapter 55 . 6/23/2013
Ah, that was beautiful and broke my heart.

Good to see you again. I've missed your writing.
InsanityRulez chapter 55 . 6/23/2013
Five words:

This drabble collection. is Awesome.

Chapter 28 made me lol so much; went back three times and re-read it. You should try and write some more humour fics.

Can't wait for the next update. See Yah! (this is an unusually short review *looks concerned*)
AmunRa chapter 55 . 6/23/2013
Good piece! I enjoyed the little bits of the past interspersed with the trauma of having been defeated by Aizen.
kurgaya chapter 55 . 6/23/2013
That was wonderful! I loved how poetic the ending seemed to feel :)
JoPoGirlsKickAss chapter 54 . 5/21/2013
These were all fantastic!
d011 chapter 54 . 3/25/2013
This is a wonderful story! Please update!
Noitamina chapter 54 . 2/25/2013
It's so good so far! Please continue!
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