Hurhurgur I love sex :3

HOT

I love all of the chapters to the story, but I have a request. Could you make a Fanfiction on q male Crona x Kid. I like them more be because I am bisexual and I like an effeminate male to love. Thank you for considering it. Also, amazing story you have written here. Keep up the good work.

Me again. Less a review this time, and more a thought.
In the manga, Chrona's gender is never revealed. One of the people who write Soul Eater actually basically said that they were undecided on whether Chrona was a boy or a girl.
Medusa's abuse probably included starvation, which would delay development of secondary sexual attributes, IE, if Chrona's a girl, she wouldn't develop breasts, and they'd NEVER be very large, or if Chrona's a boy, he'd probably look girly and have a hard time gaining muscle.
There's also the fact that Chrona could be a hermaphrodite, and be both genders.
Any of these could result in good material for writing, for example, once a female Chrona starts eating healthy, her bust would start to grow slowly, but Chrona would be scared and confused. A male Chrona would confuse people because he's so feminine-looking, leading to awkwardness all around.
A hermaphrodite Chrona... Well, it'd be hard to do meaningfully, but the potential for drama, heartwarming moments, and character development and exploration would make it worth it, but I'd suggest research to avoid making dumb mistakes, and everyone being in character would make it very interesting.
Chrona is a goldmine for drama because of the gender confusion.
In fact, You could have Chrona suffer from actual gender confusion. Such a lack of interaction with people would mean that Chrona not only has no idea what sex is, but what gender is either. How would Maka deal with a female Chrona that's clearly in love with her, but has no idea what a lesbian is?
Mildly related, Ragnarok is a dick, but does care for Chrona in it's own weird way. Mostly because if Chrona dies, Ragnarok dies too. Having Ragnarok fall in love with Chrona would be done for humor, drama, or both.

Kid wasn't perfectly in character, I feel, but he was close enough. My main gripe is actually that, this being their first time, there should have been some degree of awkwardness. The first time someone has sex, the often have no idea what their doing, and porn isn't a good source to draw on for ideas, as the poses used in pornography are actually for arousing the viewer more than the people being filmed.
It was, by no means, bad, mind you. They just seemed more experenced then they should have been.
Also, heres an idea that could make this heartwarming. Sex isn't the only way for a woman to lose their virginity. A hard enough impact can tear the hymen, and Medusa's abuse of Chrona, or even just combat could do it too. Have Kid comfort Chrona about how Chrona feels "unworthy" perhaps?

I'm not the big lemon-obsessed type and at certain moments I almost (almost!) skip scenes out of embarrassment but in overall, I think it was really well written! XDD BUT HELL, I COULDN'T STOP LAUGHING AT THE END, BLACK*STAR AND PATTY PEAKING AT THE COUPLE, THAT WAS HILARIOUS! XDDDDDD

So cute lol

xD those two xD

Well, this is a thoroughly satisfying end to such a hot, hott fic. Lol. I so imagined Kid yellin' at Patty & Black*Star there at the end. P.S. I SO loved that ending. X3

Saw that ending cumming! XP *Sorry for that bad pun* I can't imagine hoe stunned and awkward Kid must feel. X] Though I somewhat expected Ragnarok to offer and 'help' Crona out during this part, but I guess it's good he didn't otherwise Kid would probably be really PO'D as well as turned on. Lol. I'll move on to the 3rd chapter now.

Lmol! That was a good ending and a hott start. ;P I shall continue my read.

It's Wonderfull.
Excuse me, I don't speak english, but is a good fic, good good GOOD fic.

...

this is...fantastic

Oh...my...goodness. I must now find an unsuspecting Kid, drag him off to a house in the middle of nowhere, and have my way with him. Apologize to Crona for me... oh, and could you possibly write a one-shot (or more ;) on the two peepers in all their frisky glory? (Honestly, where is my shame!) Encore! Encore!