Despite it's lenght, it was very beautiful. The prevailing sense of melancholy gives way to a dream-like point of view. Very good. Adding to C2.

This is a nice bit of fluff
I'd almost forgotten the name of the swallow...

FAR FAR AWAY THERE WAS A LAND CALLED ! EVERYONE WAS HAPPY UNTIL ONE DAY AN EVIL DICTATOR NAMED DARK JEW XOX CAME AND TOOK OVER THE LAND! SHE SET UP A CAMP CALLED CRITICS UNITED! SHE EVENTUALLY BEGAN TO USE PROPAGANDA CALLED "REVIEWING" "BETAING" AND "CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM" THESE TECHNIQUES WORKED AND GOT OVER ONE MILLION FOLLOWERS!

THE BRAVE WARRIORS THEY CALL "TROLLS" FOUGHT AGAINST THEM BUT FAILED!