Three things I have to say! First of all: I feel really, truly sorry for Yao. Second: Yao should know better than to use his sore hiney as an excuse to keep Kiku to him (though it does make for a very good fluffy-fanficton plot, I'll hand you that).

Third thing: I was really impressed by your fanfiction! The writing was dauntlessly flawless to me, and flowed really nicely in my head. I mean-I winced to see Yao falling clear as day before my mind's eye, but the clarity and flow of your style is something you should definitely keep up! Kiku was just a TINY bit OOC near the end of the story, but he wasn't so much that it completely nickedthe rest of the prose off... Or maybe I'm wrong; maybe he does act that way around Yao when no one's looking ;) That's something I'll have to contemplate on tonight.

Now, excuse me while I go sift through more of your works. I think I feel the spur of a fan-seed in me...

Simply /lovely/.

Well that was cute.

Very.

I'm not a big fan of cute, but it was cute.

Which is a good thing.

The plot itself was kind of random, but no one can resist the plotbunnies lol.

So good job.

It was very cute.

awww cute :'')))
also, i have a recommendation for you - "Because It Is From Japan", by FujimoriChikaru, if you haven't already. it's nichu (obviously) and there's a lot of angst and fluff and adorableness and the smut is GREAT. like, i've read and reread that smut A LOT. and may or may not have tried to imagine it.
*cough* anyway, do read it, it's fantastic, and you'd like it :D
anyway, ily and keep being fantastic 3

CUTE XD

China, why you own so many Woks? didn't you know that they hurt when they fall on you? XD Love the fluff!

this is very cute, and yes, that's what a wok is.

Adorable. I really enjoyed it ~

Good story! Good job on the characters! It is like Japan to worry and rush over to help. I'm glad he and China have overlooked the betrayal. I like this pairing, too.

It's cute :)

Good story and I think you did a very job with it. I really like this paring so I enjoyed reading your story.

Awww this was soo cute!

ChuuNi/NiChuu needs more love DX

xD That's so cute -claps-

... My sis once hit herself with a wok, much the same as Yao just did. She said it hurt. I'm not trying, so we'll take her and Yao's word for it ;

Anyway, thanks for posting this D

~N#

When Kiku whispers, "I am sorry," for the second time, after digesting the full brevity of it this reader was at a loss for words.

It's a very sweet oneshot and very solemn at the same time. definitely needs more NiChu. Thank you very much for uploading, I enjoyed this story.

Awww...this was so cute~!

I wish that this pairing had more love...it would make me happy to see FF flooded with ChinaxJapan or JapanxChina fics.. XD

Thanks for writing this! I had an extreme shortage of fluff this week...especially for this pairing...YOU SAVED MY LIFE~! The stress from school is gone now...

Once again, thank you!

~Hazukan~