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Qoheleth chapter 1 . 8/7/2012 Dear Ferrets: When I ended the last chapter of "Sacred Host" with the comment that Teresa's mother had a special intention for the Sickles family's evening rosary, at least one reviewer concluded that I had something highly significant in mind. Actually, I had nothing at all in mind - and, in fact, I still don't. So I'm giving you, as a "Sacred Host" subscriber, the opportunity to influence the storyline. What should Mrs. Sickles and her family be praying for in the next chapter? (Ideally, it should be something that can be brought up as a plot point in a later chapter.) Sincerely, Qoheleth P.S.: Sorry, no review. I'm only contacting you this way because I don't know your e-mail address, and I can't send you a PM. (I've left it anonymous, so you can delete it after reading it.) |
Stalker Witch chapter 1 . 6/15/2011 I. um... I really liked this story... Yeah... I did |
Shockenheimer chapter 1 . 1/30/2011 Great fic. All the details realy made it a nice read :) Im almost waiting for the hunter to come back and finish the job :D Oh please make it come back :P On a side note, I noticed you use "its" when there should be "its". "Its" means "it is". So you use it like say... "its a hunter". "Its" is used when the thing belongs to or is a part of something... like "the hunter has its hood..." |
RustyPaperclip chapter 1 . 10/5/2010 Hey there. This is a pretty steamy fic you got here. I love all the lil details you put in like the humidity of the swamp for example. Makes it easier to imagine the scene happenin. Poor hunter though, he didn't quite manage to get Nick's a**. On a different note, I noticed that you made this mistake: 'walk faster then Nick' should be 'walk faster than Nick'. 'Then' is related to time, while 'Than' is used in comparative statements. Apart from that, s'all good. Thanks for writing this. |