why did you leave it off like that,u really had me caught up in it,(good work on the crona creation story):-)

...Damn.

I almost feel sorry for Medusa, here. I really like the expansions you did, where the original plan was to make a new witch.

Fascinating. I wonder if she died? Probably. (I don't know.)

I think you hit the right "disturbing" level. Medusa is a very complex character: is she like this in canon, or is she a 'mere' villain? (I wouldn't know.)

She slips between the lines, concealing truths even from herself. Who is this woman, this mask of death? (I'll never know.)

I'm incredibly lucky to find this gem of a fic. I love everything about this: from the erratic dreams to the dialogue that stayed very true to the characters. You definitely got down the disturbing mood/tone.

This story is both incredibly well written, in character, and gives a very great insight into one of my favorite anime villains. I must say this is presently violent and the sexual undertones almost make it freakier.

Your word usage and description flow nicely and I got a mental image while the text was still easy to read.

I think you're probably the only writer able to capture Medusa's sadistic yet intelligent persona. Even I haven't tried to tackle this kind of character yet and kudos to you for writing it so well.

Now THIS is an awesomefic.

...no. an EPICFIC.

THANKS FOR THIS WONDERFUL EPICFIC!

I don't even have words to describe this.

That was beautiful.

...

I... I love you.

Thank you for writing this.

SOMEONE PLEASE EXPLAIN TO ME WHY THIS DOESN'T HAVE MORE REVIEWS.

This is...so beautiful. Can I like, just, hnngh.

I don't see anyway this could possibly be more in character, what it is that I suspect is that there are readers who don't have the patience to read through an entire story formatted like this one but oh my good golly gosh was it worth it.

I love it.

I love you.

I love the way you wrote this.

You are a beautiful person.

This is, by a mile, the best Medusa fanfic I ever had the honour of reading. I was holding my breath throughout, and your ending hit me like a sucker punch to the gut. Rock on, you amazing writer.

OH. MY. WORD. Thank you for not theorizing that Stein is Chrona's father. Thank you for writing a piece of Medusa-centric fiction that's not only worth reading, but is so splendidly, repulsively, cruelly in character that it can't be looked away from. Thank you for this.